FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "I'll Tell You No lies.""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello rhonnie69
I like how you tell us about I'll Tell You No lies
with you story of the brother and sister teasing each other while finding their way of the woods
Gert
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Hello rhonnie69
I like how you tell us about I'll Tell You No lies
with you story of the brother and sister teasing each other while finding their way of the woods
Gert
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
What a wise poem you've written. There is a clear relationship bwteeen the siblings which is kept straightforward and simple. It's a moment in the woods and it works beautifully.
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What a wise poem you've written. There is a clear relationship bwteeen the siblings which is kept straightforward and simple. It's a moment in the woods and it works beautifully.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2018
