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Jake the Snake

Snakes need friends too

3 total reviews 
Comment from Jacqueline O.
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What a cute poem. I'm not particularly fond of snakes, so it was a bit uncomfortable to read, lol, but it was adorable and well-done nonetheless. This definitely felt as if it was written from a child's perspective, and I liked that. Keep writing, and best of luck!

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
    Thank you so much for your read and your encouraging review.
Comment from meeshu
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an amusing Monorhyme poem. the single rhyme itself makes the writing fun. hard to write a serious Mono. great rhyming work and good luck in the contest..

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
    Thanks for your read and your encouraging comment.
Comment from Sugarray77
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You have written a great entry for the Poem for a Child Poetry Contest. I love the fun of your meaning and the great rhyming sequences that you've portrayed in a few simple Stanzas. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
    Thanks for your read and your encouraging comment.