Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

Okay, I'm hooked. I'm also in for a wild ride. The basis of this story is captivating and different from my usual easy-going mystery and crime reading. I'm glad I don't have to wait a week for the next chapters.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023

Thank you. LJ, for taking a peek.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What a great read and introduction to a/this story, the buildup and description of the upcoming story is quite compelling, I look forward to reading more, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023

Thank you, kahpot

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

A very well-written and exciting post. You capture your reader from beginning to end. A little timely with a call to execute the former Joint Chief of Staff for treason.
Great action and character description. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023

Thank you, Mary.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I don't know if this is meant to be some kind of parable but it sure sounds like one. I think the friends of the late president have all found disfavor with him and he like to see them all eliminated by whatever means. He believes in public execution if you don't agree him.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023

Must be RIPublicans. : )

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Goodness. Very Hunger Games, but your writing makes it your own thoroughly exciting post and prelude to what I hope will be many more. Excellent description and the character and plot sound fascinating. Well done. I look forward to more.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023

Thank you, John. The story is already complete, and I will try to re-promote them as the coin comes available.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

It sounds like there is only one man to kill here, and that is the man in charge! There is a poignant message here and it reveals a Dictator at the helm, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023

Thank you, Dolly.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Wow! I know I'm going to love this story. I'm hooked already. Those killed were the President's friends. The president must be Bill Clinton! Looking forward to what happens next.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023

Good to hear you like it.

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Now this is interesting . This is setting stuff up, now I can read the others. My wifi has been going in and out today. Driving me nuts. Can't set up the new printer without good internet. I am losing my mind.
Karen

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023

Good.

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 08-Oct-2023

I need to lie down. I will catch up with you after i have read soem more. Karen

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I'm glad you led me to this story, Bill. What an exciting beginning! I can't think of a better start to pull a reader in.
Now we follow Ben to see if he manages to kill the others, or will he be killed. Loved it! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020

I need to tweak this prologue to better align with the eventual conclusion. I would need to reveal spoilers here to show you.

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

A frightening premise and a little too real, I would say as a I would not put much past the administration we have now! Will try to get to reading some more.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018

Thanks, FB