Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

This is lovely. It has a great flow. The message is comforting and clear. I like the way you have presented your work. The lines and rhymes work well together. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Sandy.

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

So very glad I have a savior who loves me despite myself and allows me to come boldly before Him, though I never feel very bold. I'm so glad He forgives and walks with me still. Very well done. Rox

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Rox.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Such a reassuring piece written in a style with which I am certainly unfamiliar but your writing is very rhythmic and soothing...not contrived or forced...so, that says a lot! :) :)

Thank you for sharing! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, YM.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I am pleased the Club's prompt inspired you. I admired your regular, rhymed triplets. Your "storms" metaphor is powerful and your presentation is very appealing. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Joan.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem. A great tribute to the lord and everything that he does for us. It's well-written, interesting, an inspirational uplifting piece. Your artwork is lovely, perfect for this poem.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Misty.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a blessing it is to know Hos presence always is near and that we are always welcome at the throne of Grace. Well done poem of encouragement, Patricia!

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Helen.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patricia, This is a very well written poem for the Inspirational Work club. I love the words you used and the art work went well with your words. Thank you for participating. love, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Teri

Comment from mrsmajor

Excellent

If not for those walks, I wouldn't be as close to our Loving Father, as I am...always to know He is near, is what makes us keep on going, even through the difficult times, your poem was a joy to read, Pat, thanks for sharing...Blessings,

Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Victoria.

reply by mrsmajor on 23-Aug-2018

You're very welcome, Pat, it was my pleasure...

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A warm and tranquil spiritual and faithful write Patricia, you see the light clearly and I wish you well, an inspiring poem for the club event, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Dolly.

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

I really enjoyed this and it is so very well written. I didn't realize there was a inspirational club, and will have to check it out. Lovely poem, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review, Debbie.