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Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Scene at a Red Lobster "Pons and Ned meet at different locations
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Comment from Ulla
Hahahahahaha, Bill, where on earth do you get it from? A wonderful conversation for cross purposes. That Ned is daft as a brush. I love it. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018
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Hahahahahaha, Bill, where on earth do you get it from? A wonderful conversation for cross purposes. That Ned is daft as a brush. I love it. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Ulla. I think there?s something wrong with this guy.
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Yeah, you may be right. We'll see. :)
Comment from nomi338
Ned has never failed to give me a case of the giggles. This poor fool has an abundance of absurdities that he never hesitates to pew without invitation or provocations. He just opens up and lets them fly, and that is why he is my go to guy for laughs.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Ned has never failed to give me a case of the giggles. This poor fool has an abundance of absurdities that he never hesitates to pew without invitation or provocations. He just opens up and lets them fly, and that is why he is my go to guy for laughs.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Thanks, nomi. I really need to squint to get Ned to say some of the stuff he says.
Comment from Spitfire
Clever names for the restaurants. LOL (and barf too) at the lines about eating roaches as part of house cleaning. The pair are clueless when it comes to names--and so gullible.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Clever names for the restaurants. LOL (and barf too) at the lines about eating roaches as part of house cleaning. The pair are clueless when it comes to names--and so gullible.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Shari
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job, Bill, with your story. It seems Pons is forever the fool. I like how the waiter, Gunter, played into the scene. Your picture is a good choice. Your lines read smoothly with a lot of sarcasm. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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You did a good job, Bill, with your story. It seems Pons is forever the fool. I like how the waiter, Gunter, played into the scene. Your picture is a good choice. Your lines read smoothly with a lot of sarcasm. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 17-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Jan, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ya know, Bill, I'm really surprised that someone hasn't shot, stabbed, beaten, or strangled Ned to death by now. Especially Pons, poor guy.
Of course even if someone did attempt to do Ned bodily harm he'd think they were just tryin' to Gator grapple and put the dude down faster than Donald Trump at a Hillary Clinton Rally.
Funny stuff, bill, as usual!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Ya know, Bill, I'm really surprised that someone hasn't shot, stabbed, beaten, or strangled Ned to death by now. Especially Pons, poor guy.
Of course even if someone did attempt to do Ned bodily harm he'd think they were just tryin' to Gator grapple and put the dude down faster than Donald Trump at a Hillary Clinton Rally.
Funny stuff, bill, as usual!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Dean. One day I'll probably have to have a Ned's Murder scene. Pons will be the likely suspect, along with everyone else.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh dear, it's a wonder that Pons agrees to meet Ned anywhere. Fun little conversation here, Bill. It didn't sound like any Red Lobster I'd been to and poor Pons, with such a weak stomach shouldn't go there!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Oh dear, it's a wonder that Pons agrees to meet Ned anywhere. Fun little conversation here, Bill. It didn't sound like any Red Lobster I'd been to and poor Pons, with such a weak stomach shouldn't go there!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Pons needs to check his genetic tree to see if he and Ned are really related.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Bill. I must be missing something. I recognize the names of the characters Ned and Pons but do not understand the context of this story. Is one a slob? Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Hi Bill. I must be missing something. I recognize the names of the characters Ned and Pons but do not understand the context of this story. Is one a slob? Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Pons is the regular guy and Ned is a dim bulb.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
It's late in the week and I have a batch of unused sixes, so I thought I'd give one to my favorite cousins. No matter what someone tells him, Ned doesn't get it... I love that! LOL!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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It's late in the week and I have a batch of unused sixes, so I thought I'd give one to my favorite cousins. No matter what someone tells him, Ned doesn't get it... I love that! LOL!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Ned is quite dim.
Comment from judiverse
Gunter sounds awfully hoity toity to work at the Red Lobster. He sounds like strictly a white tablecloth restaurant greeter. Great fun with his name. Ned seems in over his head, even at the Red Lobster. Funny names of other eateries mentioned. Fun that Ned says he haunts some of the other restaurants mentioned "like a ghost." Very enjoyable, and Ned is his usual clueless self. He does seem to have a good time, though. judi
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Gunter sounds awfully hoity toity to work at the Red Lobster. He sounds like strictly a white tablecloth restaurant greeter. Great fun with his name. Ned seems in over his head, even at the Red Lobster. Funny names of other eateries mentioned. Fun that Ned says he haunts some of the other restaurants mentioned "like a ghost." Very enjoyable, and Ned is his usual clueless self. He does seem to have a good time, though. judi
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Judi. Ned does seem to stay dim.
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The pair would be great in a sports dialogue, kind of like ".Who's on First" that Abbott and Costello did. judi
Comment from Adri7enne
I had a hard time deciphering your dialect. All the "How to" writing books I've read really discourage trying to duplicate dialect through weird spelling like this. Anyway, when I got it translated it still didn't seem to have a point. Maybe I just didn't get your humor in this piece, Bill. Maybe next time.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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I had a hard time deciphering your dialect. All the "How to" writing books I've read really discourage trying to duplicate dialect through weird spelling like this. Anyway, when I got it translated it still didn't seem to have a point. Maybe I just didn't get your humor in this piece, Bill. Maybe next time.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Thanks for giving this a look.
