The One Who Holds My Heart
The first date that really mattered.17 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Wow! What memories you shared with us. I loved reading this. I enjoyed all the little interesting facts like the mascara in that pink & green tub, the Po O' Gloss, the Moody Blues. You gave readers much descriptive words to chronicle your first date. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your 43 years of marriage to your best friend. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Wow! What memories you shared with us. I loved reading this. I enjoyed all the little interesting facts like the mascara in that pink & green tub, the Po O' Gloss, the Moody Blues. You gave readers much descriptive words to chronicle your first date. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your 43 years of marriage to your best friend. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your review and appreciation of my story. It is so fun to have readers who willingly down memory lane with me.
All my best,
Sally🌻
Comment from damommy
What a wonderful story! Just goes to show that happiness pops up when you least expect it. How fortunate the two of you are to have found each other and to have shared these wonderful years.
Great writing that puts the reader alongside you through the story.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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What a wonderful story! Just goes to show that happiness pops up when you least expect it. How fortunate the two of you are to have found each other and to have shared these wonderful years.
Great writing that puts the reader alongside you through the story.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for the excellent review on my piece. I am very fortunate and blessed. Going down memory lane with a willing reader is always a lot of fun. All my best, Sally🌻
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is very well-written. I like stories with a happy ending. I was getting a sonogram and somehow wound up talking about the technician's dating life. She had smeared a gooey substance on my chest. She said she never gets a second date. I said men don't like to go home slippery. It makes their wife suspicious.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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This is very well-written. I like stories with a happy ending. I was getting a sonogram and somehow wound up talking about the technician's dating life. She had smeared a gooey substance on my chest. She said she never gets a second date. I said men don't like to go home slippery. It makes their wife suspicious.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your excellent review of my piece. I am glad you liked it. It sounds like to now have a humorous story birthed from this category as well. All my best, Sally🌻
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Even back then you both look well suited and a union that would last 43 years, a wonderful story of love, listening to the Moody blues brought back some memories for me too, a delightful story, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Even back then you both look well suited and a union that would last 43 years, a wonderful story of love, listening to the Moody blues brought back some memories for me too, a delightful story, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review, Dolly. It is even better when I have readers who can go down memory lane with me. I appreciate your kind words so much. ❤️Sally
Comment from Debbie Pope
This was a good contest. The stories are so interesting. That was sweet of you to pick your husband for the story. It sounds like he was your best first date of all first dates. Not many people have a lifetime love like yours. It was nice to read about such a relationship.
Your story really takes me back to a time when girls did not call boys. And to a time when high school students had meetings and busy schedules. I still wear Great Lash Mascara.
I truly enjoyed your trip down memory's lane. I wish you the best in the competition.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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This was a good contest. The stories are so interesting. That was sweet of you to pick your husband for the story. It sounds like he was your best first date of all first dates. Not many people have a lifetime love like yours. It was nice to read about such a relationship.
Your story really takes me back to a time when girls did not call boys. And to a time when high school students had meetings and busy schedules. I still wear Great Lash Mascara.
I truly enjoyed your trip down memory's lane. I wish you the best in the competition.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Thank you Debbie, I appreciate the excellent review. I love to take readers down memory lane anytime I can. I am blessed to share my life with my husband. I hope it inspires and encourages.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
What a lovely story! It's so funny... I know several people who have scary fathers -- my girls actually think their dad is one. hahahaha! Well, they know that he won't allow anyone messing with them, for sure, and that passes on to all the boys who want to drop by. It's heaven! hahaha
Thanks and good luck in the voting!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Dear Mystery Writer,
What a lovely story! It's so funny... I know several people who have scary fathers -- my girls actually think their dad is one. hahahaha! Well, they know that he won't allow anyone messing with them, for sure, and that passes on to all the boys who want to drop by. It's heaven! hahaha
Thanks and good luck in the voting!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Thank you Robyn for the excellent review. I had a lot of fun writing it. I hope you can share this with your girls.
Comment from Shreya Ramanathan
Aww.. that is such a nice story. First date with the right person is always memorable. I am really glad you found the one person who mattered the most and shared your life with him. Nicely conveyed and all the best for your contest!
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Aww.. that is such a nice story. First date with the right person is always memorable. I am really glad you found the one person who mattered the most and shared your life with him. Nicely conveyed and all the best for your contest!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Thank you Shreya for the excellent review and kind words. It was so grand to write our first date down on paper and get it to print today. I felt I accomplished a lifetime goal.
