The Kept Appointment
Dribble Flash Fiction34 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
I never got a chance to read this during the competition, but I can easily see why it won. Funny story and may even happen sometimes.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
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I never got a chance to read this during the competition, but I can easily see why it won. Funny story and may even happen sometimes.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2018
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It did happen. My vet told me the story. The dog lived just down the street. Thank you for reviewing, Bill. I appreciate it.
Comment from artisart4u
It is a dribble alright. The dog was a drop off at the vet's I suppose and the owner will get him later.
Your poem is nice and funny to me.
Good luck with it.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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It is a dribble alright. The dog was a drop off at the vet's I suppose and the owner will get him later.
Your poem is nice and funny to me.
Good luck with it.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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No, the dog lived right down the street from the vet. He went alone, and the staff called his owner to tell him HE was late for the appointment. lol. True story.
That's for a great review.
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That is so funny.
Comment from Adri7enne
Lovely story, damommy. It says a lot in just 50 words. It forms a complete idea, fully rounded to the very end. Congratulations on the win. I'm very pleased for you.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
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Lovely story, damommy. It says a lot in just 50 words. It forms a complete idea, fully rounded to the very end. Congratulations on the win. I'm very pleased for you.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
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Thank you. I was taken by surprise. I've never won a site-sponsored contest before. Thank you reviewing.
Comment from Joan E.
I liked your unexpected conclusion--what a well-trained canine! The title and picture selection helped to establish the mood for this Flash Fiction. Congratulations on winning the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
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I liked your unexpected conclusion--what a well-trained canine! The title and picture selection helped to establish the mood for this Flash Fiction. Congratulations on winning the contest- Joan
Comment Written 28-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much. I had no idea it would win, but I'm so happy.
Comment from Joy Graham
This is a very cute story :) It reminds me of that dog that used to take the bus to the park on his own. So funny. A dog going to the vet on its own is too funny. I just watched a video on facebook that showed dogs that didn't want to go to the vet. They were hilarious.
Congratulations on winning this contest. Well done and well deserved.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
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This is a very cute story :) It reminds me of that dog that used to take the bus to the park on his own. So funny. A dog going to the vet on its own is too funny. I just watched a video on facebook that showed dogs that didn't want to go to the vet. They were hilarious.
Congratulations on winning this contest. Well done and well deserved.
Joy xx
Comment Written 28-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
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Thank you, Joy. I appreciate this. Fortunately, the dog lived just down the street. My cats like going to the vet. He's so kind and sweet to them. One time, we were waiting for him. Finally, my cat got down and slipped out the door and immediately went to his office to find him He came back laughing., carrying her in his arms.. I've been going there 25 years and I've never been to his office. HAHAHAHA
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 28-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
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Thank you!
Comment from l.raven
Hi Yvonne, how cute is this...I think that would be precious to open the door and the dog would be there...I wonder if they asked him for his insurance cards...LOL...I love your story told my sweet friend...so very well written sweet girl...perfect picture...love you lots....Linda xxoo
I hope you are feeling well...take care...xxoo
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Hi Yvonne, how cute is this...I think that would be precious to open the door and the dog would be there...I wonder if they asked him for his insurance cards...LOL...I love your story told my sweet friend...so very well written sweet girl...perfect picture...love you lots....Linda xxoo
I hope you are feeling well...take care...xxoo
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Thank you, Linda. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I'm doing better after having my shoulder completely replaced. Still have a long way to go to get full mobility back, but I'm getting there. Thanks for asking.
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Did you have to do therapy?....I know it will take you awhile....one day at a time my sweet friend...and you are always so welcome...take care...God Bless...love xxoo
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Yep, PT twice a week. Thank you.
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I go twice a week for my neck...it?s doing better...your a sweet friend...xxoo
Comment from KL Williams
Ha! I love it! What a great little story. Definitely not something my dog would do though. Lol Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Ha! I love it! What a great little story. Definitely not something my dog would do though. Lol Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much. I'm so happy you like it.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image.
-I like your entry.
-It begins well, as it
makes me wonder about
the client being unaccompanied.
-I like the humorous twist
at the end.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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-Good image.
-I like your entry.
-It begins well, as it
makes me wonder about
the client being unaccompanied.
-I like the humorous twist
at the end.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Thank you, Pam. This little dog wasn't going to wait for his master. He didn't want to be late. lol
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You are welcome. I guess he was just a punctual pup!
Comment from rspoet
Hello Yvonne,
A fun story for the Dribble contest.
That's one smart dog, but my experience is that dogs don't like
veterinarians very much. They usually run and hide. lol
Good twist at the end.
Well done
Good luck in the contest, my friend.
Robert
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Hello Yvonne,
A fun story for the Dribble contest.
That's one smart dog, but my experience is that dogs don't like
veterinarians very much. They usually run and hide. lol
Good twist at the end.
Well done
Good luck in the contest, my friend.
Robert
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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All his patients love Dr. Foster. I'm not surprised this little dog was anxious to get there. My cat tries to follow him in the office. Thank you for reviewing.