The Kept Appointment
Dribble Flash Fiction34 total reviews
Comment from Anne B Francis
Ah now that proves animals have more sense than we credit them with, but it is strange how they know when you will arrive home from work, or when they are due to arrive home from a trip - very good and love the hint at humour
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Ah now that proves animals have more sense than we credit them with, but it is strange how they know when you will arrive home from work, or when they are due to arrive home from a trip - very good and love the hint at humour
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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I'm always saying how smart animals are. They can do some amazing things, but there are people who still think they're dumb animals. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Ulla
Hahahahha, Yvonne, I can just imagine this. Wonderful! Just imagine a four legged canine walks into the vet's reception but the owner has stayed back home. Great, and good luck in the contest. Warm regards. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Hahahahha, Yvonne, I can just imagine this. Wonderful! Just imagine a four legged canine walks into the vet's reception but the owner has stayed back home. Great, and good luck in the contest. Warm regards. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you, Ulla. I appreciate this. This story is true. 8-)
Comment from sandy montgomery
Lol. Humor for sure shines in this short story. I like the unlikely turn of events. What dog would volunteer to go to the Vet? Yes this is a memorable one. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Lol. Humor for sure shines in this short story. I like the unlikely turn of events. What dog would volunteer to go to the Vet? Yes this is a memorable one. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you, Sandy. This really happened at my vet's. The dog lived right down the street, but it seemed he knew when his appointment was. 8-)
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Wow that is funny!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Very funny. My cat always knows when it's time to go to the vet and hides under the ned. This is an excellent entry in the contest. According to my personal psychic advisor, who by the way, is the smartest chimp on earth, you will win and send me half the funny money. Thanks in advance.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Very funny. My cat always knows when it's time to go to the vet and hides under the ned. This is an excellent entry in the contest. According to my personal psychic advisor, who by the way, is the smartest chimp on earth, you will win and send me half the funny money. Thanks in advance.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Only if you promise to share your next win. 8-)
My cats don't mind going to the vet. They sit in my lap until it's time to go in. They love their vet.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What an awesome dribble!! (don't think I've said that since the boys were potty training over 2 decades ago!) LOL! :) :) Seriously, though, this is a brilliant write for the 50 word limit -- tells the story and gets a reaction from the reader - great job!! :) :)
As always, thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!! :) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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What an awesome dribble!! (don't think I've said that since the boys were potty training over 2 decades ago!) LOL! :) :) Seriously, though, this is a brilliant write for the 50 word limit -- tells the story and gets a reaction from the reader - great job!! :) :)
As always, thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!! :) :) Yvette
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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LOL. What a; delightful review. You made me laugh. Thank you so much.
Yvonne
Comment from jenintorre
This a great flash fiction. I wasn't prepared for that ending
, it came as a great surprise. A very well written dribble.
I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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This a great flash fiction. I wasn't prepared for that ending
, it came as a great surprise. A very well written dribble.
I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much, Jen. I appreciate it.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Yvonne,
This is wonderful!!! The fact that it is true is beyond funny. Such a conscientious little dog. This bit of flash fiction is a winner if ever there was. Thank you for sharing. This made my morning,
~patty~
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Hi, Yvonne,
This is wonderful!!! The fact that it is true is beyond funny. Such a conscientious little dog. This bit of flash fiction is a winner if ever there was. Thank you for sharing. This made my morning,
~patty~
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you, Patty. I enjoyed the story when our vet told us about it. I really appreciate this great review.
Comment from giraffmang
Nicely done Yvonne,
You've got the fifty words right on the nose here. It's like one of those old jokes given another twist.
Neat entry for the comp.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Nicely done Yvonne,
You've got the fifty words right on the nose here. It's like one of those old jokes given another twist.
Neat entry for the comp.
All the best
G
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you. First one I've ever tried. Just lucked out with it. 8-)
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Good job! Reminds me of the dog (or was it a cat?) who would take the bus every day, both ways. People on the bus got used to seeing him as a regular passenger. He didn't pay, but the driver let him ride anyway. :)
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Good job! Reminds me of the dog (or was it a cat?) who would take the bus every day, both ways. People on the bus got used to seeing him as a regular passenger. He didn't pay, but the driver let him ride anyway. :)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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How cute. You never know what animals are going to do next, but they're so smart, it's never surprising to me. Thanks a lot, Phyllis.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a lovely story but I have to warn against the remark in the notes that says this really happened. This writing is supposed to be fiction and, if it really happened, it isn't. If it isn't fiction you will be disqualified. Just lose that remark in the notes. No one will really believe it happened, it is justoo fantastic.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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This is a lovely story but I have to warn against the remark in the notes that says this really happened. This writing is supposed to be fiction and, if it really happened, it isn't. If it isn't fiction you will be disqualified. Just lose that remark in the notes. No one will really believe it happened, it is justoo fantastic.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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I wondered about that. Okay, thank you for telling me.
