Comment from Renee J. St.Germain

Good

I like the flow of your poem and how you talk about grief and how to deal with it in a positive way. My only suggestion for you is use the word *own* instead of only for "Then tried to take your only life". Other than that, this is an excellent poem.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018

Thanks Renee.
I had just reposted, added, and touched it up.
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Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Say your like me and got dealt...
'The Ace of Spades Death Card of Pain' times three?
Lost your only Son, then your only Wife, then tried to take your only Life...
Take it out of your Heart, Extinguish it from your Soul, for it will haunt you for the rest of your Life, and take a Horrible Toll! Swallow it down, let it rest on the 'Bottom of Your *Crest,' and call me in the morning!
And, I guarantee relief!
Take this from someone who has been there and done that a 'Latter Day Saint Priest!' I loved this Ricky a great write as always very well done very accomplished writing kindest regards Meia xx

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018

Thanks love.
I just added and touched it up a bit because Renee St. J. Germain gave it only four Stars.
Ricky...