Vegetables
Eating for a healthy life.65 total reviews
Comment from Merajul
First of all , congrats for selecting the Title !
Apart from meeting technical requirements, it has a lot of prescription :))
Good one . Admire your imagination.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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First of all , congrats for selecting the Title !
Apart from meeting technical requirements, it has a lot of prescription :))
Good one . Admire your imagination.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Well, RJ, what can I say? I could not have gotten better advice on how to look after my well being if I had gone on to Google, which I frequently do. This acrostic of yours is very good and every line contains good sensible advice. Nothing in the whole piece needs adverse comment. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Well, RJ, what can I say? I could not have gotten better advice on how to look after my well being if I had gone on to Google, which I frequently do. This acrostic of yours is very good and every line contains good sensible advice. Nothing in the whole piece needs adverse comment. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments and contest wishes.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are educational, clear and
thought provoking. The reader thought about the great advice
this poem gives. The artwork is perfect. It compliments both
the theme and words of this poem.
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are educational, clear and
thought provoking. The reader thought about the great advice
this poem gives. The artwork is perfect. It compliments both
the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Pantygynt
My mother always said I should eat up my vegetables for just about all the reasons you give here in this neat little acrostic.
I did wonder though whether you really meant 'regiment' or perhaps you intended 'regimen'. I reprint the following definitions from the on-line dictionary.
'Regiment: a permanent unit of an army typically commanded by a lieutenant colonel and divided into several companies, squadrons, or batteries and often into two battalions.
"the Royal Highland Regiment"
synonyms: unit, outfit, force; More
2.
archaic
rule or government.
"the powers of ecclesiastical regiment which none but the Church should wield"'
'Regimen: a prescribed course of medical treatment, diet, or exercise for the promotion or restoration of health.
"a regimen of one or two injections per day"
2.
archaic
a system of government.'
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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My mother always said I should eat up my vegetables for just about all the reasons you give here in this neat little acrostic.
I did wonder though whether you really meant 'regiment' or perhaps you intended 'regimen'. I reprint the following definitions from the on-line dictionary.
'Regiment: a permanent unit of an army typically commanded by a lieutenant colonel and divided into several companies, squadrons, or batteries and often into two battalions.
"the Royal Highland Regiment"
synonyms: unit, outfit, force; More
2.
archaic
rule or government.
"the powers of ecclesiastical regiment which none but the Church should wield"'
'Regimen: a prescribed course of medical treatment, diet, or exercise for the promotion or restoration of health.
"a regimen of one or two injections per day"
2.
archaic
a system of government.'
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for all your comments.
Comment from dmt1967
The only vegetable I ate as a child was sweetcorn lol. I think that had more to do with the green giant than how good it was for me, though lol. This is a well written poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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The only vegetable I ate as a child was sweetcorn lol. I think that had more to do with the green giant than how good it was for me, though lol. This is a well written poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for you review and comments. RJ
Comment from Zue65
I enjoyed reading your excellent poem. It is really challenging to write an acrostic and come up with connected lines as you did well here. I agree eating vegetables is a healthy way to preserve life.
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I enjoyed reading your excellent poem. It is really challenging to write an acrostic and come up with connected lines as you did well here. I agree eating vegetables is a healthy way to preserve life.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments. It is the challenge of acrostic that I enjoy. RJ
Comment from Lulube
A simple means of feeding the human body. Great advice, especially for the heart. Simple and concise wording to create the imagery for the benefits of our vegetables. Great work, and many good luck wishes to win the contest.
lulube
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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A simple means of feeding the human body. Great advice, especially for the heart. Simple and concise wording to create the imagery for the benefits of our vegetables. Great work, and many good luck wishes to win the contest.
lulube
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments and contest wishes. JR
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welcome
lulube
Comment from BeasPeas
I'm with you on this. I'm vegetarian and love my veggies. Good luck in the contest with this fine entry. Try them roasted in the oven with olive oil and salt and pepper. Marilyn
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I'm with you on this. I'm vegetarian and love my veggies. Good luck in the contest with this fine entry. Try them roasted in the oven with olive oil and salt and pepper. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your review. Will try roasted.
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Hi RJ. You will love roasted. Set oven to 400, brush with olive oil, sprinkle salt and pepper, lay slices out flat on a baking tablet or pan, turn over as they cook with spatula for even cooking. Check periodically for tenderness. They are done when tender and brown. Delicious. :) Marilyn
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Thank you.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Writer
I love the acrostic form of poetry. This is the style of writing that would make great inspirational posters. It's more like the telling of a story rather than poetry to me. I hope that helps and good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Hi Writer
I love the acrostic form of poetry. This is the style of writing that would make great inspirational posters. It's more like the telling of a story rather than poetry to me. I hope that helps and good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments and contest wishes.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Writer
I love the acrostic form of poetry. This is the style of writing that would make great inspirational posters. It's more like the telling of a story rather than poetry to me. I hope that helps and good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Hi Writer
I love the acrostic form of poetry. This is the style of writing that would make great inspirational posters. It's more like the telling of a story rather than poetry to me. I hope that helps and good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your comments and contest wishes.
