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Of Hearts and Heartaches

Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "If My Heart Could Talk"
Poems about falling in or out of love.

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Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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This is a lovely entry for the Love Poem contest, FM. A heart that "will always be true" is what everyone wants, but not all of us get. I love that "if my heart could talk" are in both your opening and concluding lines to really emphasize that love.

Well done! Best wishes for the contest.

bichonfrisegirl aka Connie

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
    Thank you so very much for the excellent review and the kind comments.
reply by bichonfrisegirl on 12-Aug-2018
    You're welcome ... my pleasure!
Comment from F. Wehr3
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Good love poem. I enjoyed this one with a nice rhyme scheme and repetition of if my heart could talk. I stumbled a bit with the second to last line. If may suggest from my very soul instead of for. Good luck in the contest.

Take care,
Russell

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
    Thank you for the rating and I will check up on your comment.
Comment from zlp22
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Very good. Many people do not listen th their heart and make the wrong choice when it comes to love. Good luck in the contest. Everyone will be much happier to follow what their heart is saying.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2018

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
    Thank you for the excellent rating and comments.