Goodbye, my love
It hurts too much10 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
She can't go on with out him such a sad ending to a love that once was. Sad way to go ending it this way how will she ever know if he would come back again.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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She can't go on with out him such a sad ending to a love that once was. Sad way to go ending it this way how will she ever know if he would come back again.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the great review
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Smiles
Comment from donette1914
wow what a sad poem of love and loss and the pain that goes with this
thank you for putting so much into this piece
very well penned
I really like your artwork
it was a pleasure to read and thank you for sharing
I hope you do well in the contest
donette1914 Aug13, 2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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wow what a sad poem of love and loss and the pain that goes with this
thank you for putting so much into this piece
very well penned
I really like your artwork
it was a pleasure to read and thank you for sharing
I hope you do well in the contest
donette1914 Aug13, 2018
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your poem about a lost love with its rhymes and tragic conclusion. Speaking in the first person added to the intensity of the theme. Best wishes in the Love Poem Contest. Sighs- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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I admired your poem about a lost love with its rhymes and tragic conclusion. Speaking in the first person added to the intensity of the theme. Best wishes in the Love Poem Contest. Sighs- Joan
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Jen. A girl after my own heart. I know I have definitely thought about suicide twice when it happened to me. I am so happy that those things are in the past. Well done. It is a good entry for the contest. Good luck. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Hi Jen. A girl after my own heart. I know I have definitely thought about suicide twice when it happened to me. I am so happy that those things are in the past. Well done. It is a good entry for the contest. Good luck. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thanks Pam, my friend for your great review.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, what a beautiful yet very sad love poem, it is hard to get over someone you have and still love, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Excellent, what a beautiful yet very sad love poem, it is hard to get over someone you have and still love, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thanks for your great review.
Comment from zlp22
Very sad poem. I think it is better to have love at one time than never. Perfect picture. Lovers do not make good friends. Good luck in the contest. A lot of people have loved and lost.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Very sad poem. I think it is better to have love at one time than never. Perfect picture. Lovers do not make good friends. Good luck in the contest. A lot of people have loved and lost.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thanks for your great review
Comment from fm wright
As beautiful but sad poem on the very serious subject of suicide. It's really terrible when anyone, especially the young, thinks that losing a love is the end of the world. Profoundly written. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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As beautiful but sad poem on the very serious subject of suicide. It's really terrible when anyone, especially the young, thinks that losing a love is the end of the world. Profoundly written. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for your great review
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You're so very welcome.
Comment from Hayley Zemontas
A unique take on a love poem, for instead of bliss and passion, this exudes pain and sadness at a relationship gone wrong. The breakdown of a relationship is always a tragedy, but especially when it is one persons fault and when betrayal is involved. This poem is very dark and deep, and I liked the emotive language and use of rhyme. The end is also deeply sad and a shame, but also a realistic portrayal of how some people feel after losing a loved one through them being unfaithful. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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A unique take on a love poem, for instead of bliss and passion, this exudes pain and sadness at a relationship gone wrong. The breakdown of a relationship is always a tragedy, but especially when it is one persons fault and when betrayal is involved. This poem is very dark and deep, and I liked the emotive language and use of rhyme. The end is also deeply sad and a shame, but also a realistic portrayal of how some people feel after losing a loved one through them being unfaithful. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much, Hayley for your wonderful review.
Comment from keimosobie
I like the beginning I got some sense of the pain and sense of loss.
But not enough for the suicide at the end. I like the picture and the poem
does not build up enough. I don't feel the betrayal. Not enough to really put
an end to your life. No tears. I guess that's just the way I would write it. Maybe
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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I like the beginning I got some sense of the pain and sense of loss.
But not enough for the suicide at the end. I like the picture and the poem
does not build up enough. I don't feel the betrayal. Not enough to really put
an end to your life. No tears. I guess that's just the way I would write it. Maybe
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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I think you are right, it is not one of my better poems. I wont bother promoting it. Thanks a lot for your comments. Jen.
Comment from kiwijenny
No no no no no no...that's not the answer is what this prompted me to say
I went to a funeral once where the young boy committed suicide. The fire chief who presided over the funeral asked during the prayer for people to raise their hand if they were thinking about this too. Only he would see and would get them help...his son had done this..
No no no
God bless
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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No no no no no no...that's not the answer is what this prompted me to say
I went to a funeral once where the young boy committed suicide. The fire chief who presided over the funeral asked during the prayer for people to raise their hand if they were thinking about this too. Only he would see and would get them help...his son had done this..
No no no
God bless
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thanks you so much for your comments.
