Forgotten Memories
Some memories will never be forgotten..15 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Oh how very true -we really have no idea what may be 'locked deep inside ' an exquisite image 'wisp of a memory ' - a lot conveyed here in this short format
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Oh how very true -we really have no idea what may be 'locked deep inside ' an exquisite image 'wisp of a memory ' - a lot conveyed here in this short format
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Thank you for taking the time to review and being so kind!
Comment from MSJVClarke
This is an excellent read for the memory of a loved one and such a beautiful short but powerful sentiment. We never know when the memories will appear, just as you say.
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This is an excellent read for the memory of a loved one and such a beautiful short but powerful sentiment. We never know when the memories will appear, just as you say.
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Thank you so much. Really appreciate your kind review!
Comment from Therese103
So true! All of a sudden, because of a happening, chance meeting, or some odd thing, we receive a ''blast from the past''! Well done!
Blessings, Therese
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So true! All of a sudden, because of a happening, chance meeting, or some odd thing, we receive a ''blast from the past''! Well done!
Blessings, Therese
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the kind review!
Comment from Boogienights
This is a lovely but sad poem you've shared. Its true that memories can come out of nowhere and when they do its bittersweet. The picture you included fits your words perfectly. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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This is a lovely but sad poem you've shared. Its true that memories can come out of nowhere and when they do its bittersweet. The picture you included fits your words perfectly. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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Thank you so much! I always appreciate your reviews!
Comment from phill doran
hello Aprilviolet.
A very good piece concisely making a valid and emotional observation. We carry lots of triggers, or I should say that there are lots of triggers we are receptive to. A smell, a song.
I read that all of our cells die in cycle and if so, that a memory must pass from one cell (the old one) to another (the new one) at some point - but that memories are held across multiple cells and it is incomplete or inaccurate duplication which in some cases causes us to "remember" something incorrectly or incompletely. Perhaps then, there is a strand of cells with a memory embedded in them but which lacks complete connectivity because of one missing part: and then a lock of hair falls on a brow in a given way, with the sun at such-and-such and angle and the circuit becomes complete - and the 'lost' memory floods back.
You have written a lovely piece here.
I wish you well with your further writing
cheers
phill
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hello Aprilviolet.
A very good piece concisely making a valid and emotional observation. We carry lots of triggers, or I should say that there are lots of triggers we are receptive to. A smell, a song.
I read that all of our cells die in cycle and if so, that a memory must pass from one cell (the old one) to another (the new one) at some point - but that memories are held across multiple cells and it is incomplete or inaccurate duplication which in some cases causes us to "remember" something incorrectly or incompletely. Perhaps then, there is a strand of cells with a memory embedded in them but which lacks complete connectivity because of one missing part: and then a lock of hair falls on a brow in a given way, with the sun at such-and-such and angle and the circuit becomes complete - and the 'lost' memory floods back.
You have written a lovely piece here.
I wish you well with your further writing
cheers
phill
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a great review! Many thanks!
