Puncturing Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Vemonously Yours?"My thoughts on this "Ago Old Subject."
6 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing all of the information on Lepidoptera--the good, the bad and the ugly! I am so sorry you had a bad encounter and hope the steroids and Benydril bring fast-acting relief. Take good care of yourself- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you for sharing all of the information on Lepidoptera--the good, the bad and the ugly! I am so sorry you had a bad encounter and hope the steroids and Benydril bring fast-acting relief. Take good care of yourself- Joan
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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It's getting there...
Slowly...
Thanks Love,
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The reader might get a preview how this is going to go with you tongue-in-cheek line: " I order a... 'Bologna Sandwich' and I get a 'Bunch of Baloney!' I'm glad you put the violence warning because that is clearly a violent caterpiller. I was going to relocate a fairly good sizes long beetle. I foolishly picked it up I and gently placed it in my palm to let it comfortably ride to the outside in good health. That little SOB grabbed onto my flesh with needle point claws and BIT or STUNG me. It left a welt which lasted for days. I am sorry your was even worse. I hope writing about it helped in some way. You wrote your account in such a way that you draw the writer in to scramble and I did with my Dogpile search engine to see what your aforementioned moths look like. I guess if any laughter came from this it is clearly a "gallows laugh" Well written.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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The reader might get a preview how this is going to go with you tongue-in-cheek line: " I order a... 'Bologna Sandwich' and I get a 'Bunch of Baloney!' I'm glad you put the violence warning because that is clearly a violent caterpiller. I was going to relocate a fairly good sizes long beetle. I foolishly picked it up I and gently placed it in my palm to let it comfortably ride to the outside in good health. That little SOB grabbed onto my flesh with needle point claws and BIT or STUNG me. It left a welt which lasted for days. I am sorry your was even worse. I hope writing about it helped in some way. You wrote your account in such a way that you draw the writer in to scramble and I did with my Dogpile search engine to see what your aforementioned moths look like. I guess if any laughter came from this it is clearly a "gallows laugh" Well written.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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I used to see the Beauty in Insects but I know now why people step on them!
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today and thanks for your bite!
Comment from Adam Ihnken
That is crazy. I'm not sure how to review this, but I need the member bucks and this is the highest paying so here goes.
Firstly the way you wrote it stuck me as almost a poem. The thoughts are scattered and although I get the gist of what is happening, I feel like if it were written as a story there would be a level of detail that is simply missing. As a poem it would need refinement as well but obviously it is written as a chapter in a book.
It was confusing to me, because these seem to be diary or journal (if that sounds less like a teenage girl thing) entries.
Still the way you write is entertaining to say the least. Some sort of an odd mix of poetry and short stories.
Good luck in your future endeavors and with any more insects you may encounter!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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That is crazy. I'm not sure how to review this, but I need the member bucks and this is the highest paying so here goes.
Firstly the way you wrote it stuck me as almost a poem. The thoughts are scattered and although I get the gist of what is happening, I feel like if it were written as a story there would be a level of detail that is simply missing. As a poem it would need refinement as well but obviously it is written as a chapter in a book.
It was confusing to me, because these seem to be diary or journal (if that sounds less like a teenage girl thing) entries.
Still the way you write is entertaining to say the least. Some sort of an odd mix of poetry and short stories.
Good luck in your future endeavors and with any more insects you may encounter!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Check my portfolio for my 'Shed a Tear Fairytales and Fables "
There are a dozen or more in these children's books.
Thanks for this and have a blessed day
Dr Ricky 1024.
Later today
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Ricky. Are you really ill? Did you mean to misspell venomous? Not sure what vemenous means. In any case I hope you are OK. I will await further posts. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Hi Ricky. Are you really ill? Did you mean to misspell venomous? Not sure what vemenous means. In any case I hope you are OK. I will await further posts. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Pam!
I was in Bad shape then!
Venomously Yours?"
Will explain everything!
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from LynnetteOK
This is true? What did you get bit by? Are you okay?
You will never run out of things to write about.
I hope and pray you're doing well. Please let me know.
LynnetteOK
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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This is true? What did you get bit by? Are you okay?
You will never run out of things to write about.
I hope and pray you're doing well. Please let me know.
LynnetteOK
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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It was a deadly and poisonous caterpillar.
Light lime in color with spike type-hairs.
The rash is slowly dissapating.
They gave me a shot...
OUCH!!
And some liquid Bentdril
Plus a prescription.
The shot or prescription is a steroid.
The Incredible Hulk?
LOL!!!
LATER ...
DR PEPPER
Comment from Mistydawn
That would be awful, especially after feeling so good about finishing your piece. I do hope you're alright. Incidents like this are why I'm so scared of bugs, especially the flying kind. It's well written, interesting but you might want to look at Vemonously. I'm sure spelling was the least of your concerns at the time.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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That would be awful, especially after feeling so good about finishing your piece. I do hope you're alright. Incidents like this are why I'm so scared of bugs, especially the flying kind. It's well written, interesting but you might want to look at Vemonously. I'm sure spelling was the least of your concerns at the time.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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Ya, I noticed that error.
And thanks...
I'm in 'Fast Track' at the Hospital now but...
It's SPREADING!!!
Ricky
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Hopefully, they'll get to you soon.
