Deadly Confession
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Killer on the Run"Family secrets can be your worst nightmare.
9 total reviews
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I'm having a hard time following this with all the characters. Luigi is Tito's twin, so when he was seen in town, couldn't it have been his twin they spotted? And are Emma and Jeanie the same ones from Granny's story?
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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I'm having a hard time following this with all the characters. Luigi is Tito's twin, so when he was seen in town, couldn't it have been his twin they spotted? And are Emma and Jeanie the same ones from Granny's story?
Comment Written 16-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for your review going back and reading previous chapters. You're right they are twins and yes it could be Luigi, but according to the birth records Luigi is dead which leaves the police completely baffled lol.
Thank you again for your review, taking time to read older chapters. Your help, support, friendship is always greatly appreciated, take care.
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I didn't answer your question. I don't think I put Emma and Jeanie in Granny's revenge, their not on the character list, but I might've mentioned them in passing since they are Rachel's family.
You'll see that Rachel, Joe, Jerry, Jeff, Kirk, Sharon are in a lot of my stories. I've built them up over the course of two years, so they're my favorites, I know them very well.
I did mention Jeanie and Emma in Bittersweet Revenge.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A well written and interesting story, my friend. It sounds like he had good reason to be angry, though has jeopardized his future by committing murder. Best wishes with your novel, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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A well written and interesting story, my friend. It sounds like he had good reason to be angry, though has jeopardized his future by committing murder. Best wishes with your novel, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 17-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for such a great review. I'm so glad you liked it. I think that would make anyone angry especially when you consider how they treated his mom.
Thank you again for your wonderful review, take care.
Comment from Ulla
My God, this is carnage. I don't know what to think. I'm only glad that it is fiction, but hey, this seems to be happening in real life all the time as well. Doesn't it? Well written. I hope there is a point with all these tragic deaths. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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My God, this is carnage. I don't know what to think. I'm only glad that it is fiction, but hey, this seems to be happening in real life all the time as well. Doesn't it? Well written. I hope there is a point with all these tragic deaths. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, I'm glad you like the story. Luigi is seeking revenge on the Maroni's for what they've done to his family.
Thank you again for all your support, your friendship. It means a lot to me, take care.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh my. Very sad that two little girls died. So now a second killer is on the loose and Rachel at home worrying about an intruder. Looking forward to the next chapter. Rox
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Oh my. Very sad that two little girls died. So now a second killer is on the loose and Rachel at home worrying about an intruder. Looking forward to the next chapter. Rox
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Yes, there are two killers. Luigi is after the Maroni's and the hitman after Rachel because she witnessed Luigi's crime, killing the eldest Maroni child.
Thank you again for all of your support it means so much to me, take care
Comment from apky
Another racy piece that I thoroughly enjoyed reading, my friend.
This story is so complex I really love getting into the characters and their motives. At least at the moment I think I don't have to worry about Rachel so much. But the murder of the little girls and their mother, Mrs Maroni?, was hard. Which makes for an fabulous read.
Keep it coming, Misty.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Another racy piece that I thoroughly enjoyed reading, my friend.
This story is so complex I really love getting into the characters and their motives. At least at the moment I think I don't have to worry about Rachel so much. But the murder of the little girls and their mother, Mrs Maroni?, was hard. Which makes for an fabulous read.
Keep it coming, Misty.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for such a fabulous review and such encouraging words I am so glad you're enjoying the story. Rachel is safe, for now; until Luigi finds out she survived. Meanwhile, he has three more to kill, the homeless lady and the daughters.
Thank you again for such a remarkable review, all your support, help and friendship. They mean So much to me, take care.
Comment from Michelle Iden
I really got into the chapter with the first sentence. I like the plot and after reading I want to keep in with the story.
I like the use of certain words that help to convey an image as if you are right there watching.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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I really got into the chapter with the first sentence. I like the plot and after reading I want to keep in with the story.
I like the use of certain words that help to convey an image as if you are right there watching.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for such a positive encouraging review. It means a lot to a writer to hear how much you liked her work and how you want to continue with the story. You definitely made my week.
Thank you again for such a fantastic review, take care.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hi, it pays to listen to your dreams/nightmares, sometimes. What a good story you have here. I really liked the beginning, as you hook your readers early and take us on the journey with good characters and realistic dialogue. It will be interesting to see where it goes from here.
I noticed no errors and this is a work I' would recommend to other readers for review, cheers, Ana.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Hi, it pays to listen to your dreams/nightmares, sometimes. What a good story you have here. I really liked the beginning, as you hook your readers early and take us on the journey with good characters and realistic dialogue. It will be interesting to see where it goes from here.
I noticed no errors and this is a work I' would recommend to other readers for review, cheers, Ana.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for such a marvelous review and all of your
wonderful praise. It means so much to a writer to get a fantastic review like this.
Thank you again for such an excellent review and all of your support, take care.
Comment from royowen
So Joe cleverly dreams of all the things that happen, but it looks like Luigi is going to get away with it, but I think that revenge is purely his only aim, it will be good to see if Rachel gets out of her jam, and that Joe's dream isn't purely prophetic. Well done, excellent piece-meal episode, well done,blessings, Roy
Typo : He watches his half--sister's chest(s)
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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So Joe cleverly dreams of all the things that happen, but it looks like Luigi is going to get away with it, but I think that revenge is purely his only aim, it will be good to see if Rachel gets out of her jam, and that Joe's dream isn't purely prophetic. Well done, excellent piece-meal episode, well done,blessings, Roy
Typo : He watches his half--sister's chest(s)
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for your review I'm so glad you liked it. Luigi may get away now, but Rachel is determined to figure out who the killer is. Thank you again for your all your help, support and finding my mistake, take care.
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Most welcome
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Mistydawn
with and doubt in my mind you have an excellent chapter learning who the killer Rachel is in fear where Rachel is fearful by being alone and has the killer is lurking, outside is well described, and there is the part where the killer he feel save after the police car passes; hears a tap on his car window
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Hello Mistydawn
with and doubt in my mind you have an excellent chapter learning who the killer Rachel is in fear where Rachel is fearful by being alone and has the killer is lurking, outside is well described, and there is the part where the killer he feel save after the police car passes; hears a tap on his car window
Gert
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for such a remarkable review I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Both Rachel and Luigi are forced to face their fears.
Thak you again for all your help, support and friendship it means so much to me, take care.
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You are so welcome Mistydawn
Gert
