Be the Lighthouse
Pix This Challenge8 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
June, This is a very well written poem to go with the picture this challenge. You used such great and true inspirational words that went so well with the picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this Kyrielle poem. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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June, This is a very well written poem to go with the picture this challenge. You used such great and true inspirational words that went so well with the picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this Kyrielle poem. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this kyrielle. Appreciate the kind words.
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you are so welcome. You did a really good job my friend!
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you are so welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wise words here, be carers and help others just like the lighthouse, an inventive write June and I love the repeated line to drive home your point, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Wise words here, be carers and help others just like the lighthouse, an inventive write June and I love the repeated line to drive home your point, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Dolly, for sharing your thoughts on this kyrielle. We need more light in the world and less fight.
Comment from royowen
An excellent subject and some great moments in your poem June, some wisdom and great phrasing, there are a few suggestions here, I could offer more, but it may offend, not my aim dear girl, but bless you, great Kyrielle, blessings and love, Roy
Suggestion, I'm caught in sea's insanity. 2: For past mistakes are oft ignored 3: be they lighthouse -- or lusty sword.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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An excellent subject and some great moments in your poem June, some wisdom and great phrasing, there are a few suggestions here, I could offer more, but it may offend, not my aim dear girl, but bless you, great Kyrielle, blessings and love, Roy
Suggestion, I'm caught in sea's insanity. 2: For past mistakes are oft ignored 3: be they lighthouse -- or lusty sword.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the suggestions, Roy. Honored to be helped by a natural poet like yourself.
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My pleasure June, thanks for the lofty compliments, I don't know about natural.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a message for motivation and self-improvement that we should live like a lighthouse not a sword for peace and happy living; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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This speaks a message for motivation and self-improvement that we should live like a lighthouse not a sword for peace and happy living; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you!
Comment from Michelle Iden
I liked the rhythmic tone of this poem. It was almost that one could sing it. I really enjoyed your writing style and conveying how it's better to be in light than in darkness.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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I liked the rhythmic tone of this poem. It was almost that one could sing it. I really enjoyed your writing style and conveying how it's better to be in light than in darkness.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review!
Comment from Aussie
I loved your presentation, June. I too love the Kyrielle. "I am the Light of the World," said Jesus. In these dark days we look towards his guidance and love. The lighthouse is there for a reason, to stop ships and us from destruction on rocky shores. Well done new friend.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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I loved your presentation, June. I too love the Kyrielle. "I am the Light of the World," said Jesus. In these dark days we look towards his guidance and love. The lighthouse is there for a reason, to stop ships and us from destruction on rocky shores. Well done new friend.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for sharing your insights and encouraging words. Appreciate your taking the time to review my kyrielle.
Comment from Raul1
I think that I do get your point in this poem that we need to solve problems by peace. In order to do that we need to be the lighthouse and not the sword. Greatly said. Excellent poem! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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I think that I do get your point in this poem that we need to solve problems by peace. In order to do that we need to be the lighthouse and not the sword. Greatly said. Excellent poem! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the kind words and encouraging review!
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You're welcome
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a good response to the pix this challenge, June. Your choice of kryielle worked well with your repeating line that fits in seamlessly. Your rhymes are great, too. Your lines flow smoothly with a great message. I enjoyed reading your well-written poem. Jan
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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This is a good response to the pix this challenge, June. Your choice of kryielle worked well with your repeating line that fits in seamlessly. Your rhymes are great, too. Your lines flow smoothly with a great message. I enjoyed reading your well-written poem. Jan
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Jan. The artwork was the inspiration. The evening news just made the words come easier. We do need more light and less fight. Appreciate the encouraging review.
