Funny Honey
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Good question rhonnie69
I like the way you finally got the waiters attention was very good -- when the waiter said
You don't look like senior citizens."
"We're not. But we will be by the time we get served."
Gert
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Good question rhonnie69
I like the way you finally got the waiters attention was very good -- when the waiter said
You don't look like senior citizens."
"We're not. But we will be by the time we get served."
Gert
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
Comment from James Garrity
think you have made a really enjoyable piece here and don't see much more needed to improve! Good style and interesting work that creates good imagery, well done
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think you have made a really enjoyable piece here and don't see much more needed to improve! Good style and interesting work that creates good imagery, well done
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is a very entertaining piece and would do well as a short fiction of either General or humor genres. I would not consider it a piem, however....
Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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This is a very entertaining piece and would do well as a short fiction of either General or humor genres. I would not consider it a piem, however....
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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HELLO Y.M. ROGER: I agree with you 100%. I never intended to list this posting as a poem. That was a mistake that I made while being inattentive in the way that I posted it. Thank you for your helpful review. I intend to edit it according to your advise. I know that will make my posting better, thanks to you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
