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Alexis and Me

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Little stories involving Alexis and me, her nanny

7 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I think this is a fantastic idea. I read it out of order. Go figure! I doubt it will be the last time I do it. I know your granddaughter will cherish these stories, especially when she's an adult.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
    thanks so much, barbara, I read things out of order all the time
Comment from c_lucas
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Books written to a young loved one will always be written with love. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good job.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
    thanks so much, charlie
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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I love that you do stuff like this for her. I know someone who prints out the pictures of her grandkids. She's putting them away and when they get older she's going to give them the printed copies. No one has printed copies of pictures (except me, I do printed pictures), but how cool is that?!?! I love it.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
    the plan has been to get a scrapbook, print out the written work and add pictures I have taken of her to go with it - we'll see what happens - probably need to get to work on the first one, huh?
reply by ExperiencingLiphe on 07-Aug-2018
    That would be cool and something she'd treasure
Comment from Donka Kristeva
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Very pleasant, clear in message and well written Biographical Non fiction work. It reads like a letter to a loved one, and it is. I like the affectionate, natural and simple words.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
    thanks so much, Donka
Comment from scraps30
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This is a wonderful idea, to write a book of reflections for your granddaughter. What a gift for her! My daughter was born in February of 2009, so she's the same age as your granddaughter. She has spina bifida, and I blog about our experiences with her disability, but I've always wanted to write a personal sort of book for her like this one you have in mind. I'll be following you and will take inspiration from you.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
    thanks, scraps 30 - since you wrote this, I went back and added the titles of the books on Fanstory I started in the past if you are interested in reading any of them - I will add you to my fan list so I can read your work, also
    jan
reply by scraps30 on 08-Aug-2018
    Thank you , Jan, looking forward to it.
Comment from RodG
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I can easily relate to what you are attempting to do here, Nanny, as I have compiled a collection of poems for my granddaughter to celebrate key events in her life. I especially like your closing sentence. I wish you luck.
Rod

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
    thanks, RodG
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a great prologue. I like that is is short & to the point yet shows your love for Lexi & the purpose of the book. Thanks for the author notes. Jan

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
    thanks, Jan