Comment from giraffmang

Good

Hi there,

I enjoyed this sweet, little piece of writing.

However you may want to recheck the word count as it needs to be exactly 75 words and I make this 69.

All the best
G

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2018

Comment from heart of Lou

Excellent

That was a touching story for only seventy five words. Pets like to be free and go exploring as is natural for them, that's why they sometimes wander away.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018

Thank you 💝your comments were so very much appreciated. And, you are surely right about dogs!

Comment from Mastery

Exceptional

Outstanding entry, Lo. It's a very cute story with a lot of heart in an entirely plausible story. It's not easy to pull off such a good story in 75 words. I know.
Good luck to you in the contest. Bob

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018

Hi Again, Bob,
I really do appreciate the gift of stars and kind words. Lo

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

What a cutie in the picture. I enjoyed your story, LoannaLois, when I realized the ending & Fred was home safe. You did a good job with your contest entry. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018

Thanks Jan...that is my dog, Betsie. Thank you for the nice comments.Blessings, Terr

Comment from Halfree

Good

I had some trouble writing a revue for this posting. You have a good story line but not enough words to really tell the story. Read this several times and it just sat there on the screen, waiting for me to do something...this is the something.
I owe you a review...will wait for another of your posting'

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018

This was a contest for which we could only use 75 words in a flash fiction.. thank you for writing.

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello Loannalois, nice to meet you in this short flash fiction which I enjoyed reading. I am the same, lost pets make me sad, too. I think it was a good twist at the end when the pet he chose was indeed Fred. I noticed no errors and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018

I love your name so much. I once had a dear friend with that lovely name.
Thank you so much for your nice comments.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this 75 word Flash Fiction about Fred, the dog that run away and Gramp with the new dog. You told a really neat story in so few words. It makes me sad to hear of a lost dog or cat too! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I love a happy ending..I love dogs too. I always wanted to be the person my dog thought I was..
Beautiful picture...I'm so impressed with flash fiction it is amazing to have a complete story in such few words
Good job
God bless

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018

Thank you my friend. Yes, I love flash fiction because it is like a puzzle. You take out...you put in...LOL

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Very well done and yes lost pets are a worry, I have had two dogs in my time and got them both from pet shelters (the pound) this is an excellent sentimental short story, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018

Hello there, fellow dog lover. Thank you so much for your kind words.