Of Hearts and Heartaches
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "When Did Our Song Die?"Poems about falling in or out of love.
7 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
A sad and poignant poem about a love that has somehow lost its fire. I like the way you used the seasons and the hours of a day to paint the picture of a gradual change. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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A sad and poignant poem about a love that has somehow lost its fire. I like the way you used the seasons and the hours of a day to paint the picture of a gradual change. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Truly appreciate the excellent rating you gave me. Also for the wonderful comments.
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Thank you for nominating me as a reviewer!
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem about a once wonderful love that seems to die overnight without a reason or a visible cause. It is very sad but it happens to many of us that the once strong feelings just die.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about a once wonderful love that seems to die overnight without a reason or a visible cause. It is very sad but it happens to many of us that the once strong feelings just die.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the excellent and much appreciated comments.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the truth of love effect with the passage of time, days go by and volume and state of love lose its intensity and feeling; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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This speaks the truth of love effect with the passage of time, days go by and volume and state of love lose its intensity and feeling; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for the excellent rating and comments.
Comment from kiwijenny
I have friends who are struggling with this as we speak...
How do you lose your song....I vowed to myself and God to not stop singing. I'm so glad I married someone who vowed the same thing
God bless
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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I have friends who are struggling with this as we speak...
How do you lose your song....I vowed to myself and God to not stop singing. I'm so glad I married someone who vowed the same thing
God bless
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review and comments.
Comment from simonbagh
When everything disappears from sight.
Just when, I wonder, did our song die
If we intentionally not to try to tell lie or not to hide the truth we should not wonder we must believe that it does die the words in the poem seems are originating from a tired heart
A very lovely and impressive nicely written poem thank you very much for sharing this wonderful piece
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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When everything disappears from sight.
Just when, I wonder, did our song die
If we intentionally not to try to tell lie or not to hide the truth we should not wonder we must believe that it does die the words in the poem seems are originating from a tired heart
A very lovely and impressive nicely written poem thank you very much for sharing this wonderful piece
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review and comments.
Comment from mally mack
Your words are so beautiful while your poem is so sad. There are songs I still won't even listen to that remind me of the past... Your photo choice almost gives the feeling of ghosts which seems to be what you were going for. This effect works perfectly with your piece. I loved this <3
Best Wishes
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Your words are so beautiful while your poem is so sad. There are songs I still won't even listen to that remind me of the past... Your photo choice almost gives the feeling of ghosts which seems to be what you were going for. This effect works perfectly with your piece. I loved this <3
Best Wishes
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the exceptional + rating and your comments.
Comment from Old Soldier
Nice write. Feelings will change, going one way or the other. Nothing stays the same. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading ........,.......
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Nice write. Feelings will change, going one way or the other. Nothing stays the same. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading ........,.......
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the excellent rating and comments, Old Soldier. I will do both.
