Deadly Confession
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Second Attempt"Family secrets can be your worst nightmare.
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Comment from apky
Another well done chapter in your intricately woven story. I hope Rachel is safe now but I can't wait to read more about that convoluted family of gangsters who I suspect are the ones that might be after Rachel..
Well done.
Jeannie is setting the table when she hears her youngest daughter Emma bounce(delete-s) into their apartment.
Jeanie ~ keep the spelling uniform, either with one n or with two.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Another well done chapter in your intricately woven story. I hope Rachel is safe now but I can't wait to read more about that convoluted family of gangsters who I suspect are the ones that might be after Rachel..
Well done.
Jeannie is setting the table when she hears her youngest daughter Emma bounce(delete-s) into their apartment.
Jeanie ~ keep the spelling uniform, either with one n or with two.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for such a positive review. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I will fix the mistakes you mentioned. Probably go with the spelling I used the most.
Thank you again for all of your help, support, friendship. It means so much to me, take care.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for the summary for those of us just joining in on this tale. Your story about "bittersweet revenge" is fascinating and your use of dialog is very naturalistic, plus your leaving us in suspense is effective. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the summary for those of us just joining in on this tale. Your story about "bittersweet revenge" is fascinating and your use of dialog is very naturalistic, plus your leaving us in suspense is effective. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, I''m so glad you enjoyed it. Bittersweet Revenge is the first of the series of the Berryville Detectives series, first one I have in print. It's how Rachel became interested in the law. The story is still in my profile if you want to read it.
Thank you again for your fabulous review it means so much to me, take care.
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Thank you for more information about your series. I hope you publish more of the stories. Smiles- Joan
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I'm so glad you like my idea. I'll have 9 when I get finished editing what I've written so far.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh no! Were left hanging. Well done as always, looking forward to finding out what the rattling noise is. =[
I need to take a bit of a break from reviews as I have an online card business that is booming at the moment, plus many special orders from my co-workers. Anyway, I can't review and make cards at the same time so will take a break but try to catch up later. I am bookmarking to easily access your stories later. Rox
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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Oh no! Were left hanging. Well done as always, looking forward to finding out what the rattling noise is. =[
I need to take a bit of a break from reviews as I have an online card business that is booming at the moment, plus many special orders from my co-workers. Anyway, I can't review and make cards at the same time so will take a break but try to catch up later. I am bookmarking to easily access your stories later. Rox
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I'm very honored you wanted to bookmark it for a later date, thank you. I'm pleased to hear that your business is going so well, hope that it will continue.
Thank you for your kind review, take care, please pop in once in a while to say just to say hi, alright?
Comment from nancy_e_davis
It does sound as though Rachel is in trouble and someone is out to get her. Joe has assigned an undercover car to watch her house. I think she finally understands the fact she is in danger. Well done Dawn. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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It does sound as though Rachel is in trouble and someone is out to get her. Joe has assigned an undercover car to watch her house. I think she finally understands the fact she is in danger. Well done Dawn. Nancy:)
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review, and your encouraging words. Knowing she's in danger has Rachel completely on edge.
Thank you again for your review and all your support, take care.
Comment from Marvin Calloway
The excitement continues and so does the speculating.
Rachel is an interesting character.
She made an enemy for herself somewhere along the line.
Nice pacing.
Marv
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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The excitement continues and so does the speculating.
Rachel is an interesting character.
She made an enemy for herself somewhere along the line.
Nice pacing.
Marv
Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Rachel definitely is something else. A strong woman with a personality that's larger than life. She's developed over the course of two years, my first characters, so she's one of my favorites.
Thank you again for your review and all your support, it means so much to me, take care.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Well Mistydawn
You certinley know how to keep us readers want to keep reading your new book.
O I can Rachel is really getting up tight especially when she checked the locks on her door and windows, runs back to her bedroom;scooped up her gun from a metal lock box, she pops a clip in place-- then she Hears a window rattle, and turns towards the noise.
Gert
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Well Mistydawn
You certinley know how to keep us readers want to keep reading your new book.
O I can Rachel is really getting up tight especially when she checked the locks on her door and windows, runs back to her bedroom;scooped up her gun from a metal lock box, she pops a clip in place-- then she Hears a window rattle, and turns towards the noise.
Gert
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your review. The wreck has Rachel on edge for sure. Hopefully, she won't end up shooting an innocent person.
Thank you for your review and all your support, take care.
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You are so welcome Mistydawn.
Gert
Comment from royowen
Poor, obstinate Rachel. She carries on a trick when they try to take her to hospital, Joe tries, but it's not until her dad her to behave that she does. Back at home she hears her window rattling, fortunately she has her gun. Good finish, now we are on tenterhooks. Well done, good episode, blessings, Roy
Typo "Good luck with that, (captian)" captain?
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Poor, obstinate Rachel. She carries on a trick when they try to take her to hospital, Joe tries, but it's not until her dad her to behave that she does. Back at home she hears her window rattling, fortunately she has her gun. Good finish, now we are on tenterhooks. Well done, good episode, blessings, Roy
Typo "Good luck with that, (captian)" captain?
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your review and your suggestion. I'll fix that right now. Rachel can be a fierce little spitfire when she wants to be, lol. Poor Joe doesn't know how to handle her sometimes.
Thank you again for all your help, support and friendship it means so much to me, take care.
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Misty, I like this new story, but I'm still wondering what happened to Granny. Did they catch her in the end or what went down? I'm sorry about Rachel, but as least she's seemingly okay. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Hi Misty, I like this new story, but I'm still wondering what happened to Granny. Did they catch her in the end or what went down? I'm sorry about Rachel, but as least she's seemingly okay. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your review. I think you did miss chapter 20. Which do you prefer being told what happened or reading the chapter?
Thank you again for all your support it means a lot to me, take care.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
So you're off on a new story. What happened in Granny's story? I see she is mentioned here as being mentally ill along with Emma, but I must have missed the end of that book... bummer. No one know she's a killer and Rachel keeps their secret!!!! Rachel? WHY???
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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So you're off on a new story. What happened in Granny's story? I see she is mentioned here as being mentally ill along with Emma, but I must have missed the end of that book... bummer. No one know she's a killer and Rachel keeps their secret!!!! Rachel? WHY???
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your review. Granny was caught then escaped while being transported to prison. You probably don't remember reading it because you review so many stories.
Granny was never mentioned in this book, where do you think she was?
I don't think you read Bittersweet Revenge. Rachel found out her mom, and Emma was killing all the men who hurt them. Rachel stalled the police long enough so they could get away. Why? family loyalty. Now you've mentioned it I'm going to go back look at that part, maybe explain more.
Did that answer your questions? If not let me know, alright.
Thank you again for your review and all your support, it means a lot to me, take care.
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Are you saying Granny is Rachel's mom? The last thing I recall about Granny was the escape... or was their an accident too? I can't keep stories straight in my mind after a few weeks. Sorry.
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Granny has nothing to do with this story. She was just a perp Rachel and the gang tried to put in jail.
Granny had several narrow escapes. The last escape before her capture was the two men. They killed them through them in Granny's car and set it on fire. They then stole the men's vehicle. When the men's car was shut down remotely they burnt it. They tried to flee to an abandoned pickup where they were caught. The story flashes forward to 6 months later. On the way to prison, Jackie and Granny escape. I hope that helps, if not let me know.
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After Jackie and Granny escaped, what happened to them?
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I left it at that, maybe pick it back up again when the old gal is rested? See Joe and Rachel heard the announcement on TV. Joe says here we go again. That's how the story ended.
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I'm glad she was never caught. I rooted for Granny... my hero!
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I know you did, lol.
