Comment from karenina

Excellent

"More then 'Words.'
Have Come's and Go'es.">>>Think you wanted "than" not "then"

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"For people like Me's?
We realize to late our Worth.">>>Did you mean to say "Me"?

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"We realize to late our Worth.">>>Not "to" but "too" would be correct.

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Simple suggestions for edits while I realize you write in emotion, not necessarily intending to be grammatically correct so much as expressive and reflective of your profound loss.

If God wanted you to die you'd be dead, my friend. Live! Live for Jay!

Karenina

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018

Thanks again for your wonderful review, time, and corrections.
Ricky...

reply by karenina on 10-Aug-2018

Anytime!

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Ricky
did your son or you say this before he died from the accident say about walking the long journey of life and why exist this one really got to me--
Love Lasts?"
Love Lasts for a Life Time.
A Life Time for the Path Mate.
As, for the Soul mate?
Unfortunately, these few...
They just continue to search...
In Vain until they turn Blue?
Nothing but Pain and Shame.
As they play 'The Souless Game.'
Gert

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018

Thanks Gert.
Your a doll!
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from AprilViolet

Exceptional

My heart breaks for you. I lost my boyfriend in a car accident as well. He was twenty six. I'm so sorry for your loss. I really enjoyed reading what you wrote. Thank you for sharing with us.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018

Sorry April for your loss, too.
Two important men in our lives?
We need to Journal like crazy!!
It really helps.
One writer on here had Los their kid in an accident too.
She would grive through my works.
She found me.
And stayed.
Arnie...
(her twelve, year, old daughter)
In a car accident too.
Mother and daughter in the car...
Together?
Mother survives...as for Arnie?
Decapitated on impact.
I thought I had it bad...
Ricky..

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good, heartfelt piece you wrote about. It all comes back to your precious son, Jason's death. You used very good descriptive words and lovely art work. Again I am so sorry for our loss. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review and time Teri.
Dr Ricky 1024.