Droughts Widows
A 6 word poem22 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-word poem, Droughts Widows, uses three lines and nine syllables to bring the drought into its most dangerous possibilities. The suffering by all, the farmers who lose crops, the people who choose to end their lives. Horrid.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018
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This six-word poem, Droughts Widows, uses three lines and nine syllables to bring the drought into its most dangerous possibilities. The suffering by all, the farmers who lose crops, the people who choose to end their lives. Horrid.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018
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Hi Bill, Thank you and yes we are in dia straights now no rain for so long many a farmer is at breaking point. Still the Australian public have raised millions recently for feed etc so there is hope out there and one day it will rain again where needed. Cheers and apology for delayed response
Comment from donette1914
what a sad little poem and how I really felt this poem and my heart went out to them
it was a pleasure to read your work and the hard work that you put into it
thank you for sharing I like the artwork
very well penned
donette1914 Aug 8, 2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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what a sad little poem and how I really felt this poem and my heart went out to them
it was a pleasure to read your work and the hard work that you put into it
thank you for sharing I like the artwork
very well penned
donette1914 Aug 8, 2018
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018
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Hi donette1914 Thanks for yoir review for my droughts widows poem . the hardcwordcis the farmer coping but if I can add a voice then it is worth it Cheers Christine.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sad write and droughts can destroy livelihoods and people's self esteem, I pray for rain for you, wise words here Christine, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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This is a sad write and droughts can destroy livelihoods and people's self esteem, I pray for rain for you, wise words here Christine, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Hi Dolly, Thanks for readng my poem for the farmers and I too pray for rain it is heartbraking to see the land and farmers so desperate Cheers Christinexx
Comment from victor 66
I've always seen farming as gambling, but with a lot more work involved. You have to really love the land and the live style because weather can turn on you any time. I appreciate your poem and your concern. I wish you and the Australian farmers well.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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I've always seen farming as gambling, but with a lot more work involved. You have to really love the land and the live style because weather can turn on you any time. I appreciate your poem and your concern. I wish you and the Australian farmers well.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Hi victor your comments and review are much appreciated Cheers Christine
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You are most welcome, Christine.
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you made this six word poem as a kind of selection of news headlines. It's a terrible thing when there is a drought and so many people suffer. Thanks for making us all aware. Hope the rains come soon.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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I like how you made this six word poem as a kind of selection of news headlines. It's a terrible thing when there is a drought and so many people suffer. Thanks for making us all aware. Hope the rains come soon.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Hi Helen, Thanks for ypur review and I felt I could add my voice to the farmers plight through this medium Yes lets hope for rain soon Cheers Christine
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Chrissy, this is very good. Your subject is very relevant to the present situation - not just in Aussie land but everywhere - even in Britain, unbelievable as that may sound. It is becoming a frightening situation. To change the subject - hope you had a good holiday in Bali - I bet you are glad you did not go the island alongside Bali - Lombok. It seems the world is in turmoil. Well written piece and good luck in the contest - 6 good words! Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Hi Chrissy, this is very good. Your subject is very relevant to the present situation - not just in Aussie land but everywhere - even in Britain, unbelievable as that may sound. It is becoming a frightening situation. To change the subject - hope you had a good holiday in Bali - I bet you are glad you did not go the island alongside Bali - Lombok. It seems the world is in turmoil. Well written piece and good luck in the contest - 6 good words! Dorothy xx
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Hi Dorothy, Thanks for reading my poem and yes I am sure farmers all round often pray for rain so I add my voice to their plight. And yes having a great holiday in Bali but havent been near lombok althought did feel a few tremours on the main island a bit scary but we are safe thus far Cheers Christine
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Good job, Chrissy, on a sad poem for the contest. Your few words, as required, tell of a sad happening for many farmers everywhere. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Good job, Chrissy, on a sad poem for the contest. Your few words, as required, tell of a sad happening for many farmers everywhere. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Ji Jan, Thanks for your review and is is sad to hear of another farmers death due to all the stress so I thought I may add my voice to highlight their plight Cheers Christine We are all subjects to the elements good and bad
Comment from BeasPeas
This is excellent, Christine. Charity does begin at home and I immediately equated it with our new president here. He is focusing on his own people for a change, which is certainly refreshing. I know what these farmers are going through as I had this experience with a farm when I lived in California, rationing, etc. Discouraging. I heard of the quakes in Bali and wondered if you were there. You said you were taking a vacation there again. I hope you're okay. Hugs, Marilyn
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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This is excellent, Christine. Charity does begin at home and I immediately equated it with our new president here. He is focusing on his own people for a change, which is certainly refreshing. I know what these farmers are going through as I had this experience with a farm when I lived in California, rationing, etc. Discouraging. I heard of the quakes in Bali and wondered if you were there. You said you were taking a vacation there again. I hope you're okay. Hugs, Marilyn
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Hi Marilyn. Thanks for your review and yes I am sure charity begins at home may be the best thing. Yes in Bali still a few earth tremors felt but we are safe and enjoying our holiday plenty of sun and yummy coctails LOL Thanks for caring Cheers Christine
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I'm glad to hear you're all safe. Have a great vacation.
Comment from meeshu
it is sad that so many fine people are so dependent on their land and therefore the weather. good people driven to bad acts. good poem, Christine................meeshu
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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it is sad that so many fine people are so dependent on their land and therefore the weather. good people driven to bad acts. good poem, Christine................meeshu
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you meeshu yes it is sad and a big problem in Australia many farmers find the only way out is suicide tragic for all concerned . Needed to have a voice Cheers Christne ( Farmers daughter)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem that speaks of desperation. The farmers comit suicide because of drought and no assistance from the government. Leaving grieving widows behind.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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A very well-written heartfelt poem that speaks of desperation. The farmers comit suicide because of drought and no assistance from the government. Leaving grieving widows behind.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Hi Sandra,cThank you and desperation they have it is a sad sight to see dry arid lands and cattle and sheep dying of thirst Cheers Christine
