A Wise Mother
Wisdom from 80 year old mother.20 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very well written Etheree poem you have penned about wisdom from the 80 year old mother. You used very nice imagery with the pretty art work and very good words that we so true. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Patricia, This is a very well written Etheree poem you have penned about wisdom from the 80 year old mother. You used very nice imagery with the pretty art work and very good words that we so true. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love, Teri
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.
Comment from kiwijenny
Beautiful and so true...passed down through generations yet to come...oh Patricia that's my prayer ,..generationally for my children and theirs and theirs will be in heaven
Well penned
God bless
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Beautiful and so true...passed down through generations yet to come...oh Patricia that's my prayer ,..generationally for my children and theirs and theirs will be in heaven
Well penned
God bless
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.
Comment from Mistydawn
These are great words to remember. You're so right, a child learns by example, reacting to their upbringing accordingly. Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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These are great words to remember. You're so right, a child learns by example, reacting to their upbringing accordingly. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.
Comment from kaymart
Lovely! I can't quite tell what type of poem this is. Start at 1 syllable and add one for each line?
In any case, it's a lovely piece. You've spoken the truth from the beginning. If a mother "is wise", then she will first of all love her child without conditions.
I love that! Nicely-put and well-worded.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Lovely! I can't quite tell what type of poem this is. Start at 1 syllable and add one for each line?
In any case, it's a lovely piece. You've spoken the truth from the beginning. If a mother "is wise", then she will first of all love her child without conditions.
I love that! Nicely-put and well-worded.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Motherly love and wisdom is a driving force of life. More so than many know. I miss my mother's wise words. :) Yet, they linger and I listen for her "voice." This is a well-written poem with a beautiful message.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Motherly love and wisdom is a driving force of life. More so than many know. I miss my mother's wise words. :) Yet, they linger and I listen for her "voice." This is a well-written poem with a beautiful message.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wise words and I am sure your daughters rely on you for your great wisdom Patricia, unconditional love both ways me thinks, a wonderful nonet, cleverly constructed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Wise words and I am sure your daughters rely on you for your great wisdom Patricia, unconditional love both ways me thinks, a wonderful nonet, cleverly constructed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.
Comment from Gary DeShields
These words embrace, as well as project, an eternal truism related to authentic motherhood. Anyone reading this particular quote should show no hesitation in reciting these words verbatim at any maternal gathering.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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These words embrace, as well as project, an eternal truism related to authentic motherhood. Anyone reading this particular quote should show no hesitation in reciting these words verbatim at any maternal gathering.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.
Comment from Henry King
This poet does an excellent job of structuring the words of this poem. Each of the ten lines have a syllable count increasing by one in each line. The wise saying of the mother in the poem is more needed today, in our scattered families, than anytime in our history. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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This poet does an excellent job of structuring the words of this poem. Each of the ten lines have a syllable count increasing by one in each line. The wise saying of the mother in the poem is more needed today, in our scattered families, than anytime in our history. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.
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You are welcome. Don't worry about being late. I had eye problems from cataracts. That plagued me for a while.
Comment from Kathleen S.
Your poem speaks for itself. It is true. Although we teach our children as much as we can of what is good and right, it is up to them to find their way in the world and beyond that. Love unconditionally gives room to grow and learn. Great poem.
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Your poem speaks for itself. It is true. Although we teach our children as much as we can of what is good and right, it is up to them to find their way in the world and beyond that. Love unconditionally gives room to grow and learn. Great poem.
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.
Comment from Artasylum
The gardena hopped right off of the page and made my life fragrant. Very nice. Thanks for this love poem really to Mother's... very nice PATCELAW... looking forward to your next post. yours, diana
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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The gardena hopped right off of the page and made my life fragrant. Very nice. Thanks for this love poem really to Mother's... very nice PATCELAW... looking forward to your next post. yours, diana
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.
