Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

A beautiful example of an Etheree poem. This flows smoothly and the meaning of the poem is stated clearly even with the restraints of the syllable count. A lovely sentiment that I am learning is true as I figure out how to be more of a friend to my adult daughter than a mother. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024

I am always thankful for such. Nice review this. Thank you so much.

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

What a well-stated Etheree poem that tributes the love of a good mother.

I hope this is true. So many lonely elderly out there that are forgotten about.

Sorry, rabbit hole. Great writing!
D

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024

Thank you so much for your kind. I am glad you enjoyed this particular poem.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Etheree fever! I just posted one too and a teaching tutorial. I love this form. Beautiful, spiritual etheree poem of the wise, loving mother, my friend. Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for your day. Sally xoxo

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024

Thank you for stopping by and reviewing my. I appreciate it very much.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

A very lovely thought. A parent can set the tone for the children. Unconditional love will not only be returned, but it will be passed on to future generations. You state your idea very beautifully. It reads smoothly and your syllable count is correct for each line. A great thought for Mother's Day. judi

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Good heavens. I'd get lost in all those syllables! This is too hard for me. Really well done. A great mom always, well almost always, sees the dividends of her work and love in her children. Well said. Rox

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

Comment from sandy montgomery

Exceptional

Perfect form. I like the simplicity of the truth penned here. I think you wrote this well and with conviction. I like the photo which is suggestive of purity and the color scheme wich reinforces the simplicity. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Patricia. This is a lovely etheree poem on the legacy a mom, dads too, good parents, can leave to their children. and it's passed to future generations. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Hello there, Patricia. I love this etheree poem you've penned. It is wise to love your child without conditions, a true mothers love. I always love the shapes of these poems:) ~Kerry

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 24-Aug-2018

Oh, no worries, I'm always late with replies for some reason. lol

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for creating this lovely Etheree to convey your message. I seems to me you must be receiving many "dividends" and passing a large "legacy" on to future generations. Your artwork is a precious accent as well. Big cheers to you- Joan

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A fine poem about motherhood, Patricia! I only learned that after I became a grandmother. My own upbringing (and probably yours, too) gave us love with lots of conditions.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.