Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a tasteful poem, YM, about tow people experiencing the satisfaction gained from making love. Your picture & words pair nicely. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018

Thank you so very much for your review, Jan -- I sincerely appreciate your taking the time to read through and analyze (and hopefully enjoy!!) my 'colorful' work today! :) :) I have always enjoyed delving into and addressing the true physical connection that people make - that part of us that so many seem to not want to talk about - but I think it's truly and awesomely beautiful!! :) :) As a fantasy author, it's not my primary focus, but it is certainly there, all the time, as an almost spiritual component so-o-o-o-o, once in a while, I have to let it out... in a 'tasteful' and classy way, of course!! :) :) Thanx again for those phenomenal stars and may you have an incredible week ahead filled with singing frog choruses and leprechaun rainbows! :) :) Yvette

Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

Nice! I enjoyed this sensual little 3 lined poem very much friend. You manage to say a great deal with so few words and that is a gift in itself. The afterglow of unbridled desire is something we all seek to achieve every now and again : ))

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018

Thank you so very much for your review, Hitcher -- I sincerely appreciate your taking the time to read through and analyze (and hopefully enjoy!!) my 'colorful' work today! :) :) I have always enjoyed delving into and addressing the true physical connection that people make - that part of us that so many seem to not want to talk about - but I think it's truly and awesomely beautiful!! :) :) As a fantasy author, it's not my primary focus, but it is certainly there, all the time, as an almost spiritual component so-o-o-o-o, once in a while, I have to let it out... in a 'tasteful' and classy way, of course!! :) :) Thanx again for those phenomenal stars and may you have an incredible week ahead filled with singing frog choruses and leprechaun rainbows! :) :) Yvette

reply by Hitcher on 06-Aug-2018

Of course i enjoyed it Yvette, should you ever be in the mood to read some tasteful and classy sensual poetry on site, you should look at the stand out writing column, click on - All time best then choose Mature poetry... You will find quality there... and some mine : ) Enjoy your week friend. Hitch

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

Hi Yvette
What an erotic 3 line poem you have written. It brings back some great memories. It's a good job I have a good memory. I don't go in for all that nonsence now ... sadly. Love and hugs. Jen.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Thank you so very much for your review, Jen -- I sincerely appreciate your taking the time to read through my 'colorful' work today (even though I totally understand your viewpoint -- but memories are certainly a good thing!)! :) :) I have always enjoyed delving into and addressing the true physical connection that people make - that part of us that so many seem to not want to talk about - but I think it's truly and awesomely beautiful!! :) :) As a fantasy author, it's not my primary focus, but it is certainly there, all the time, as an almost spiritual component so-o-o-o-o, even though I, too, am definitely passed my prime, I have to let it out... in a 'tasteful' and classy way, of course!! :) :) Thanx again for those phenomenal stars, ma'am, and may you have an incredible week ahead filled with singing frog choruses and leprechaun rainbows! :) :) Yvette

Comment from Robbie Yates

Excellent

Very sensual and descriptive 3-line poem. I like the way you've played with the font sizes, creating a crescendo; the shape of the poem has the same effect. Well done.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Thank you so very much for your review, Robbie -- I sincerely appreciate your taking the time to read through and analyze (and hopefully enjoy!!) my 'colorful' work today! :) :) I have always enjoyed delving into and addressing the true physical connection that people make - that part of us that so many seem to not want to talk about - but I think it's truly and awesomely beautiful!! :) :) As a fantasy author, it's not my primary focus, but it is certainly there, all the time, as an almost spiritual component so-o-o-o-o, once in a while, I have to let it out... in a 'tasteful' and classy way, of course!! :) :) Thanx again for those phenomenal stars, sir, and may you have an incredible week ahead filled with singing frog choruses and leprechaun rainbows! :) :) Yvette

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

This is an excellent entry in the 3 Line poetry contest. According to my personal psychic advisor, you will win and send me half the funny money. Thanks in advance.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Wow - consulting your dearly departed grandmother on the subject of shower se-uhhhmm shower whoopee. Well, can I say that I'm surely glad that she's not the prudish type. :) ;) :) lol! Thanx for your review, Thomas, and those wonderful stars -- may you have an incredible week ahead filled with singing frog choruses and leprechaun rainbows! :) :) Yvette

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Sounds like a lover in a heat of passion finding love between them. Nice presentation for the poem and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Thank you so very much for your review, country ranch -- I sincerely appreciate your taking the time to read through my 'colorful' work today! :) :) I have always enjoyed delving into and addressing the true physical connection that people make - that part of us that so many seem to not want to talk about - but I think it's truly and awesomely beautiful!! :) :) As a fantasy author, it's not my primary focus, but it is certainly there, all the time, as an almost spiritual component so-o-o-o-o, once in a while, I have to let it out... in a 'tasteful' and classy way, of course!! :) :) Thanx again for those phenomenal stars and may the ranch out there provide you with an incredible week filled with singing frog choruses and leprechaun rainbows! :) :) Yvette

reply by country ranch writer on 05-Aug-2018

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Comment from Lady Jane

Excellent

well, well...this is a very sensual writing you've penned here, Y. M. I found no errors. Three short lines are capable of invoking such emotion, such energy and all due to a skill poet's will. No errors to note. Good luck in the contest.
Janelle

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Thank you so very much for your review, Janelle -- as always, I sincerely appreciate your taking the time to read through and analyze (and hopefully enjoy!!) my 'colorful' work today! :) :) I have always enjoyed delving into and addressing the true physical connection that people make - that part of us that so many seem to not want to talk about - but I think it's truly and awesomely beautiful!! :) :) As a fantasy author, it's not my primary focus, but it is certainly there, all the time, as an almost spiritual component so-o-o-o-o, once in a while, I have to let it out... in a 'tasteful' and classy way, of course!! :) :) Thanx again for those phenomenal stars, ma'am, and may you have an incredible week ahead filled with singing frog choruses and leprechaun rainbows! :) :) Yvette

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Yvette. This is a very sensual poem as you know and it is good to see some work on here that touches on the human condition without having to go into a lot of detail. worded jut so, and nothing more need be said. Good luck in the contest. Bob

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Thank you so very much for your review, Bob -- I sincerely appreciate your taking the time to read through and analyze (and hopefully enjoy!!) my 'colorful' work today! :) :) I have always enjoyed delving into and addressing the true physical connection that people make - that part of us that so many seem to not want to talk about - but I think it's truly and awesomely beautiful!! :) :) As a fantasy author, it's not my primary focus, but it is certainly there, all the time, as an almost spiritual component so-o-o-o-o, once in a while, I have to let it out... in a 'tasteful' and classy way, of course!! :) :) Thanx again for those phenomenal stars, sir, and may you have an incredible week ahead filled with singing frog choruses and leprechaun rainbows! :) :) Yvette

reply by Mastery on 05-Aug-2018

Bless you, Yvette. :) Please try to catch the chapter I posted today if and when you can. Bless you.

Bob

Comment from Shanbreen

Exceptional

Wow, Roger, this is beautiful. I love "Your sweat on my lips" -- What a wonderful line. I also like the way you build up the climax (no pun intended =)) by increasing the size of the font for each line. Your picture is subtle but it conveys the passion. Best for the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Thank you so very much for your review, sir -- I sincerely appreciate your taking the time to read through and analyze (and hopefully enjoy!!) my 'colorful' work today! :) :) I have always enjoyed delving into and addressing the true physical connection that people make - that part of us that so many seem to not want to talk about - but I think it's truly and awesomely beautiful!! :) :) As a fantasy author, it's not my primary focus, but it is certainly there, all the time, as an almost spiritual component so-o-o-o-o, once in a while, I have to let it out... in a 'tasteful' and classy way, of course!! :) :) Thanx again for those PHENOMENAL stars and may you have an incredible week ahead filled with singing frog choruses and leprechaun rainbows! :) :) Yvette

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

A steamy subject for this entry to the 3-Line Poetry Contest! I like the way you have gradually increased the font size of each line to parallel the sense of rising passion!

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018

Thank you so very much for your review, Tony -- I sincerely appreciate your taking the time to read through and analyze (and hopefully enjoy!!) my 'colorful' work today! :) :) I have always enjoyed delving into and addressing the true physical connection that people make - that part of us that so many seem to not want to talk about - but I think it's truly and awesomely beautiful!! :) :) As a fantasy author, it's not my primary focus, but it is certainly there, all the time, as an almost spiritual component so-o-o-o-o, once in a while, I have to let it out... in a 'tasteful' and classy way, of course!! :) :) Thanx again for those phenomenal stars and may you have an incredible week ahead filled with singing frog choruses and leprechaun rainbows! :) :) Yvette