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Thoughts from the bridge.15 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I have never seen your writing before. I'm so glad I found you. Your writing is excellent. My wife knows a girl who has jumped off a bridge five times trying to end her life.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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I have never seen your writing before. I'm so glad I found you. Your writing is excellent. My wife knows a girl who has jumped off a bridge five times trying to end her life.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for the great review, much appreciated.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
NO...heartbreaking thought. People care! This is just fiction, right? This is a worthwhile topic to write about because it does touch the hearts of too many people. Your poem evoked emotions in me. It's well-written. I hope you do well in the contest. P.S. Please do say it's just a piece of thought-provoking fiction!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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NO...heartbreaking thought. People care! This is just fiction, right? This is a worthwhile topic to write about because it does touch the hearts of too many people. Your poem evoked emotions in me. It's well-written. I hope you do well in the contest. P.S. Please do say it's just a piece of thought-provoking fiction!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Many thanks for your comments
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is an unfortunate reality and very sad. I like the powerful message conveyed here. We never know when someone out there by us giving them a kind word or a smile, causes them to reconsider this. I like this well written contest entry. Well done. You should do very well in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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This is an unfortunate reality and very sad. I like the powerful message conveyed here. We never know when someone out there by us giving them a kind word or a smile, causes them to reconsider this. I like this well written contest entry. Well done. You should do very well in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Thank you so mu h for your commentx.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sad write and of course many lose their confidence and succumb to the depths of dispair, well chosen descriptive words of sorrow he, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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This is a sad write and of course many lose their confidence and succumb to the depths of dispair, well chosen descriptive words of sorrow he, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Thanks Dolly for your great review. X
Comment from Artasylum
How Sad. How tragic... but, it does tell a story of mental illness in the world today. Depression is the biggest offender and is often ignored by all of us. thanks so much yours, good luck in your contes. yours, diana
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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How Sad. How tragic... but, it does tell a story of mental illness in the world today. Depression is the biggest offender and is often ignored by all of us. thanks so much yours, good luck in your contes. yours, diana
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Many thanks for your great review
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Many thanks for your great review
