Haiku (The Setting Sun)
contest21 total reviews
Comment from LaRosa
I'm late to happen on this poem. You have a true gift for expressing the physical response to natural occurrences. "Warm evening exhale" Exactly how it feels as you wait, watching, for the last light of day to disappear. Spiritual.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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I'm late to happen on this poem. You have a true gift for expressing the physical response to natural occurrences. "Warm evening exhale" Exactly how it feels as you wait, watching, for the last light of day to disappear. Spiritual.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2018
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Oh, that's so nice of you, thank you, I greatly appreciate it.
Comment from SueZen
Mmmm, just so - lovely time of day to just 'be' without doing, thinking about anything, watch the 'fading silent sun', take this perfect moment to relax, feel 'its reflective glow, warm evening exhale'.
No wonder recognized and maybe a winner in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Mmmm, just so - lovely time of day to just 'be' without doing, thinking about anything, watch the 'fading silent sun', take this perfect moment to relax, feel 'its reflective glow, warm evening exhale'.
No wonder recognized and maybe a winner in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Thank you, SueZen, I appreciate your lovely comments.
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Thank you !
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Kerry,
Thank you for sharing your entry for the haiku poetry contest. The presentation is spectacular, and the words you chose were each perfectly placed to leave the reader breathless.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Hi, Kerry,
Thank you for sharing your entry for the haiku poetry contest. The presentation is spectacular, and the words you chose were each perfectly placed to leave the reader breathless.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Awe...That made my day. Thank you, Patty, I'm honored for the six and wonderful comments:)
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Kerry - Wow! Fantastic picture to run alongside this thoughtful composition for the haiku contest. Nature at its finest and an end line as a great conclusion for a lasting visual. Well done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Kerry - Wow! Fantastic picture to run alongside this thoughtful composition for the haiku contest. Nature at its finest and an end line as a great conclusion for a lasting visual. Well done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Thank you, my friend, I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from miajaffri
I think your description of sunset is very good. I like that you call the sun silent even though it brings so much heat and light and that it emanates a glow. I remember my grandpa looking at the sunset one hot summer saying, "There goes that ball of
fire." He surely felt the evening exhale. I have a mountain that blocks my view of
the sunset. If we ever move. My first requirement for a home is to see the sunset.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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I think your description of sunset is very good. I like that you call the sun silent even though it brings so much heat and light and that it emanates a glow. I remember my grandpa looking at the sunset one hot summer saying, "There goes that ball of
fire." He surely felt the evening exhale. I have a mountain that blocks my view of
the sunset. If we ever move. My first requirement for a home is to see the sunset.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for your kind comments and for sharing your little story as well.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I love sunsets. They are so peaceful and pretty. It doesn't matter what life is like for you, what's going on, or who is mad at whoever. A sunset is like the moon, you can get lost in it.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018
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I love sunsets. They are so peaceful and pretty. It doesn't matter what life is like for you, what's going on, or who is mad at whoever. A sunset is like the moon, you can get lost in it.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2018
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Thank you, my friend, I great appreciate your comments.
Comment from Mastery
Thank you for this, Kerry. It is a beautiful thought reinforced by a wonderful color scheme to top it all off. Good luck to you in the contest. I think you have a real winner here. :) Bob
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this, Kerry. It is a beautiful thought reinforced by a wonderful color scheme to top it all off. Good luck to you in the contest. I think you have a real winner here. :) Bob
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much, Bob, I ap.preciate your kindness
Comment from Artasylum
Very, very nice... This is just a yummy poem... so enticing with the image that is killer and the words that told a story of still and comfort in that instance. yours, diana
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Very, very nice... This is just a yummy poem... so enticing with the image that is killer and the words that told a story of still and comfort in that instance. yours, diana
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you, Diana, I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from donette1914
wow talk about beautiful!!! and you wrote this well
I sure enjoyed the effort and the work you put into this
it was a pleasure to read
I hope the best in the contest
donette1914 Aug 3, 2018
I love the artwork
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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wow talk about beautiful!!! and you wrote this well
I sure enjoyed the effort and the work you put into this
it was a pleasure to read
I hope the best in the contest
donette1914 Aug 3, 2018
I love the artwork
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you, Donette, I greatly appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I love the first two lines, Kerry, but I'm not sure about the Satori. It's different, that's for sure, with 'exhale' on the end. You're right of course, when I think about it, it's the sort of thing you do at the end of the day when all the work is finished, a big exhale. Good luck with it, Giddy
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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I love the first two lines, Kerry, but I'm not sure about the Satori. It's different, that's for sure, with 'exhale' on the end. You're right of course, when I think about it, it's the sort of thing you do at the end of the day when all the work is finished, a big exhale. Good luck with it, Giddy
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Thank you, Giddy, I appreciate your kind comments and support.
