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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "For God Live Righteously"Dedicated, Thanks to God, God's Appreciation
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Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Well done, and great advise. You need to do more than just talk, have to put action to your words. I am wondering if you left out the word "the" on first line and "it" so the line would read, Profitable it is to be in 'the' good book of God, you see, 'it' seems talking...
But you may intend it just as written. I hope you do well in the contest. =} Rox
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Well done, and great advise. You need to do more than just talk, have to put action to your words. I am wondering if you left out the word "the" on first line and "it" so the line would read, Profitable it is to be in 'the' good book of God, you see, 'it' seems talking...
But you may intend it just as written. I hope you do well in the contest. =} Rox
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
The meaning in the words and the intent is very admirable but I think I've said it before that when you try to wrangle it into these formats, or restricted word counts, grammatically it becomes an issue. Primarily it feels like words are left out to achieve the word count, which drastically affects the flow of the piece, making it somewhat jerky or disjointed.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Hi there,
The meaning in the words and the intent is very admirable but I think I've said it before that when you try to wrangle it into these formats, or restricted word counts, grammatically it becomes an issue. Primarily it feels like words are left out to achieve the word count, which drastically affects the flow of the piece, making it somewhat jerky or disjointed.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from Zue65
This non fiction piece posed a challenge to the readers on how to live better on earth. I gained insights from the nuggets of wisdom infused in in this excellent piece. Thanks for sharing.
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This non fiction piece posed a challenge to the readers on how to live better on earth. I gained insights from the nuggets of wisdom infused in in this excellent piece. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review I appreciate.
Comment from heart of Lou
You have written an interesting and meaningful poem and if we all made an effort we could make such a difference in this world. The picture is very fitting too. Good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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You have written an interesting and meaningful poem and if we all made an effort we could make such a difference in this world. The picture is very fitting too. Good luck.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from Bill Schott
This article, For God Live Righteously, pretty much states that talk is cheap. Actions, those that honor God and are an example to others, are what separate the sayers from the players.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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This article, For God Live Righteously, pretty much states that talk is cheap. Actions, those that honor God and are an example to others, are what separate the sayers from the players.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review I appreciate.
Comment from Artasylum
Can't we all just get along... and yet many actions in the name of God are man made and do not come from God... there needs to be surrender of ego and acceptance of faith... nicely done. yours, diana
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Can't we all just get along... and yet many actions in the name of God are man made and do not come from God... there needs to be surrender of ego and acceptance of faith... nicely done. yours, diana
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this right review I appreciate.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
Your story is a manual for how to empathically and responsibly be a human being and it works like crazy for the prompt. Word count, theme and photo are just terrific.
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Your story is a manual for how to empathically and responsibly be a human being and it works like crazy for the prompt. Word count, theme and photo are just terrific.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this super review I appreciate.
Comment from royowen
Jesus said, that if we live and love by the first and second commanndments, "love the Lord your God, with all your mind, your heart, your strength, and the second, being the same, love your neighbour as yourself" all hangs on them. Well done, an excellent post, blessjngs, Roy
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Jesus said, that if we live and love by the first and second commanndments, "love the Lord your God, with all your mind, your heart, your strength, and the second, being the same, love your neighbour as yourself" all hangs on them. Well done, an excellent post, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this righteous review I appreciate.
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Most welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written sixty word inspiring work on how to make our lives better on earth and to become model residents who don't misuse our natural resources.
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A very well-written sixty word inspiring work on how to make our lives better on earth and to become model residents who don't misuse our natural resources.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this right review I appreciate.
Comment from apky
You know, Al Creator, I think you should be appointed chief evangelist in the White House.
What you say here is what those guys in the government should be hearing a few times a day during their working schedules.
Keep going - and apply for that job!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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You know, Al Creator, I think you should be appointed chief evangelist in the White House.
What you say here is what those guys in the government should be hearing a few times a day during their working schedules.
Keep going - and apply for that job!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for appreciation and good wishes for getting a job of chief evangelist' in the White House, for further information, you may read my profile.
