For God!
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Comment from dmt1967
This poem made me think about how man uses nature. We cut down the trees so animals lose their homes and starve. We pollute the seas and the land. Man has a lot to answer to. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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This poem made me think about how man uses nature. We cut down the trees so animals lose their homes and starve. We pollute the seas and the land. Man has a lot to answer to. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this great review I appreciate.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR:
As I read more and more of your works, it becomes obvious that you are a child of God and wish to promote His kingdom above that of this world's. To be sure, talking the talk is not what it's all about; rather, it is getting out in the world and showing the love of God in the way Christ did that makes the difference.
good luck in the contest
jan
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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ALCREATOR LITT DEAR:
As I read more and more of your works, it becomes obvious that you are a child of God and wish to promote His kingdom above that of this world's. To be sure, talking the talk is not what it's all about; rather, it is getting out in the world and showing the love of God in the way Christ did that makes the difference.
good luck in the contest
jan
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this creditable, praiseworthy, commendable and wishful review indeed I appreciate.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
By personal example of living a Godly life a man/woman is "fit for living on this earth". The Bible is the great Teacher and Lover of man. Thank you for sharing.
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By personal example of living a Godly life a man/woman is "fit for living on this earth". The Bible is the great Teacher and Lover of man. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review I appreciate.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is an excellent entry in the Live on Earth Better contest. According to my personal psychic advisor, you will win and send me half the funny money. Thanks in advance.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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This is an excellent entry in the Live on Earth Better contest. According to my personal psychic advisor, you will win and send me half the funny money. Thanks in advance.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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This is a nice, hearty 'good wish' feedback.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is exactly right! We have everything already, why do we want more, leaving others with less? It has been the way of life since Adam and Eve. We are never satisfied. You used the contest entry, God, to maximum effect, very well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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That is exactly right! We have everything already, why do we want more, leaving others with less? It has been the way of life since Adam and Eve. We are never satisfied. You used the contest entry, God, to maximum effect, very well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this nice review I appreciate.
Comment from tfawcus
It would be difficult to meet the requirements of this competition without using a few semi-colons! You have given a clear set of guidelines for someone seeking to work for the world-wide mission.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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It would be difficult to meet the requirements of this competition without using a few semi-colons! You have given a clear set of guidelines for someone seeking to work for the world-wide mission.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this commanding review I appreciate.
Comment from Lady Jane
using gifts - I'd change this to 'use gifts' of nature properly so it follows remaining text of your poem.
This is a very insightfully written piece. Packed with a poignant message and presented effortlessly it seems. Your words flow easily off the tongue and the simplicity of the message is refreshing to this reader. Good luck in the contest.
Janelle
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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using gifts - I'd change this to 'use gifts' of nature properly so it follows remaining text of your poem.
This is a very insightfully written piece. Packed with a poignant message and presented effortlessly it seems. Your words flow easily off the tongue and the simplicity of the message is refreshing to this reader. Good luck in the contest.
Janelle
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review I appreciate.
Comment from kiwijenny
I like this but do you mean by incur no loss of human and natural resources? The fact that things get used and we need to buy more keeps our economy going doesn't it?
But I agree with the rest'
God bless
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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I like this but do you mean by incur no loss of human and natural resources? The fact that things get used and we need to buy more keeps our economy going doesn't it?
But I agree with the rest'
God bless
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review I appreciate.
Comment from Skywatcher707
Until I read through this twice I didn't see that it was the 60 word (God) challenge. That explained why some phrasing was different than expected. I have pondered "be in good book of God". Do you mean to be in favour with God? To spend time in the good book ie. the Bible? Or ultimately to have one's name written down in the Book of Life? My what food for thought! The contrast presented between a natural "man's" way of living and the better way is clearly stated. 60 words well used. Why is Nature capitalized? Just curious. ð???
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Until I read through this twice I didn't see that it was the 60 word (God) challenge. That explained why some phrasing was different than expected. I have pondered "be in good book of God". Do you mean to be in favour with God? To spend time in the good book ie. the Bible? Or ultimately to have one's name written down in the Book of Life? My what food for thought! The contrast presented between a natural "man's" way of living and the better way is clearly stated. 60 words well used. Why is Nature capitalized? Just curious. ð???
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this exploratory review.
Comment from JDRBAR
Although it appears that a couple of words are missing, the message within the words that are expressed is so complete as to fulfill the contest prompt beautifully. Good job.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Although it appears that a couple of words are missing, the message within the words that are expressed is so complete as to fulfill the contest prompt beautifully. Good job.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you.
