Haiku (old tree bows in wind)
Haiku Poem - 5-7-517 total reviews
Comment from Susanjohn
:-)))) This is sooooooo clever! I really like this Haiku!...These can be tricky but you really have a nice one here. Well done and i enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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:-)))) This is sooooooo clever! I really like this Haiku!...These can be tricky but you really have a nice one here. Well done and i enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Susanjohn, thank you for taking the time to review my haiku poem. Your comments are much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from rspoet
Hello DD,
Another excellent and original haiku from your pen
with solid imagery and connection
and a clever satori line
Those look like more than just winds
perhaps gale force storms
Excellent photograph to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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Hello DD,
Another excellent and original haiku from your pen
with solid imagery and connection
and a clever satori line
Those look like more than just winds
perhaps gale force storms
Excellent photograph to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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Robert, thank you so much for taking the time to review my 3 haiku poem. I appreciate your positive feedback. ~DD
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good choice of image.
-A well written haiku, DD,
with effective imagery of the
tree and alliteration for emphasis.
-The satori line is very good,
and has good use of
the double meaning of "snap."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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-Good choice of image.
-A well written haiku, DD,
with effective imagery of the
tree and alliteration for emphasis.
-The satori line is very good,
and has good use of
the double meaning of "snap."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much Pam for taking the time to review my haiku poem. I always appreciate your feedback. ~DD
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You are welcome, DD.
Comment from bob cullen
Please tell me I'm not the only one to see this picture as a duck with its head down grazing on grass. The tree trunk forms the head while the windswept branches are shaped like the duck's body. The single branch almost touching the hill is the duck's leg.
Loved the image your poem presented
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Please tell me I'm not the only one to see this picture as a duck with its head down grazing on grass. The tree trunk forms the head while the windswept branches are shaped like the duck's body. The single branch almost touching the hill is the duck's leg.
Loved the image your poem presented
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Bob, thank you for taking the time to review and, to ease your mind, there were no ducks involved while writing this haiku. ~DD
Comment from lyenochka
Super haiku, DD! I like how you set the scene windy day which stresses an old tree's "brittle limbs." Then you give us that double meaning in the last line of a quick decision which might have "snapped" a limb. It's also perhaps a word of wisdom to let go when faced with overwhelming circumstances.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Super haiku, DD! I like how you set the scene windy day which stresses an old tree's "brittle limbs." Then you give us that double meaning in the last line of a quick decision which might have "snapped" a limb. It's also perhaps a word of wisdom to let go when faced with overwhelming circumstances.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Lyenochka, thank you for taking the time to review my haiku poem. Your thoughts are much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from donette1914
wow poor wind blown tree
I sure enjoyed the effort and the work you put into this
it was a pleasure to read
I hope the best in the contest
donette1914 Aug 3, 2018
I love the artwork
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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wow poor wind blown tree
I sure enjoyed the effort and the work you put into this
it was a pleasure to read
I hope the best in the contest
donette1914 Aug 3, 2018
I love the artwork
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2018
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Donette, thank you for taking the time to review my haiku poem. Your thoughts are much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from BeasPeas
A super entry into the contest. Love the image which is striking. It's a good accompaniment to your haiku. Good luck in the contest with this great entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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A super entry into the contest. Love the image which is striking. It's a good accompaniment to your haiku. Good luck in the contest with this great entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Marilyn, thank you for taking the time to review my haiku poem. Your thoughts are much appreciated. ~DD
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Welcome!
Comment from June Sargent
Sometimes this is how I feel! The old brittle limbs groan and creak, And I just pray I don't hear that snap! But it's not always up to us. We just hope for the best as the cold winds blow. Great example of a haiku.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Sometimes this is how I feel! The old brittle limbs groan and creak, And I just pray I don't hear that snap! But it's not always up to us. We just hope for the best as the cold winds blow. Great example of a haiku.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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June, thank you for taking the time to review my haiku poem. Your comments are appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku about the tree that bows in the wind. The wind is in some places strong and blows often enough to start growing in the direction that the wind blows most of the time.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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A very well-written haiku about the tree that bows in the wind. The wind is in some places strong and blows often enough to start growing in the direction that the wind blows most of the time.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Sandra, thank you for taking the time to review my haiku poem. Your comments are appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello PoemsOfDD
I see you haiku as good question asked will the old tree snap or not Great picture of the wind bending the tree with its wind
Gert
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Hello PoemsOfDD
I see you haiku as good question asked will the old tree snap or not Great picture of the wind bending the tree with its wind
Gert
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2018
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Gert, thank you for taking the time to review my haiku poem. Your thoughts are much appreciated. ~DD
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Smiles you are welcome DD
Gert
