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Haiku and Senryu Suites

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Book of Haiku, Senryu & Lanturne Suites

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Comment from juliaSjames
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Greetings Brother Badger

You have strung philosophical gems together in this suite. The theme of connection, the desire to inhabit life in the present, obeisance to the glory of life, all these are part of your composition.

Thank you for sharing and for introducing me to the lanturne form of poetry.

Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
    And thank you Julia for stopping by always a pleasure to hear from people that I have not met yet here a pleasure and an honor to write with you and these exciting times in this creative space.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger cull

    Darren
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I love the concept of finding treasure in life and enjoying those gems and your positive words brought the truth home, life has it's ups and downs and most of the time it is good, a fine write with a strong determined message here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
    Thank you so much darling you have been a source of consistent support and reviews here I love you very much appreciate your attention to my work. Blessing honor I'm privileged to write and collaborate with you here.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger cull

    Darren
Comment from Tpa
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I couldn't believe you more. So many people are bitter, angry, and never give one ounce of appreciation of what they have because of jealousy and greed. Good work. It made the reader think (I hope).

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
    Thank you yes I believe let me finding something with a line like think about it that hopefully they would give it some thought. In the meantime on honoured Bio review and is a blessing to meet New writers here.
    Blessings,

    Brother Badger cull

    Darren
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A very intriguing write that spans so very many ideas and employs a number of wonderful writing techniques to include the use of repetition to really bring the reader into your feelings an notions! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! :)

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
    Thanks for your review Y.M.Roger, I appreciate your comments and perception. A pleasure and honor to write with you here.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger
Comment from Zue65
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I enjoyed the poetic style and the free flowing thought expressed in the poem. The lines are fluid and flowed smoothly from beginning to end. Although I don't really agree some portions of poem, it still an excellent piece. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
    Thanks for your warm review, I appreciate your comments.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger

    Darren
Comment from Debbie Pope
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You packed a lot of life in these short stanzas-the interconnectedness of us all, living in the moment, looking for treasures in life, enjoying the ride. One of your themes is to go with the flow, which is exactly how your write.
Your writing flows from one thought to another, with an interconnection that is hard to identify. But it is there for sure. All of your themes are connected; they are just different ways at looking at life. It is all very interesting and different.
I like your unique style. Good job.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
    Thanks Debbie I appreciate your comments. I guess one thing that we can agree on here is that it is a logical progression, and a matter of perspective.

    A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger

    Darren
Comment from poetwatch
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Good way to mean across the distant. We are all connected by our DNA, brothers and sisters under the skin. Why can't people see your artistic flare and understand? This is a good poem Badger. Keep playing , writing, and keep trying to bring the world together. Thank you my friend for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
    And thank you for your wonderful of you and for understanding the different meaning behind this I really appreciate your comments. Blessings, Darren
Comment from Donka Kristeva
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In the spirit of wholeness and integrity, this poem speaks directly to the listener, we are part of One Creator; Simple and genuine ideas always leave a mark...

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
    Thank you so much for your kind review and comments. I really appreciate your input. Blessings, Darren
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks philosophy of life, living and tells experimentally ample about our attitude, feeling and appreciation of living and shares experiences of appreciation of living, survival and existence and truths about creation and balance, order and coherence in living in actions and activities, and more about shape and features of this created world, earth, planet, and cosmic matters and relation of life with the infinite creations; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR (6-STAR)


 Comment Written 24-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2018
    Again you have given me valuable Insight on how my ready is being for Speed especially by other brilliant writers I really appreciate your comments and your wonderful six star of you very appreciated blessings, Darren
Comment from irishauthorme
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A message of portent for all who would read, ponder and understand. There is so much more to life than the daily grind but so few chose to look.
In all the days of the earth's existence, there has never been a day when the clouds in the sky were arranged in the same pattern.
And life?
Hmmm.
irish

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
    Thanks so much for your comments on this and I was really surprised with the review I received from Rama Devi somehow in this one didn't write itself but I really I had a kind of strange dream and when I woke up I wrote this and after I wrote it I looked at it as a masterpiece I think the very last line is the best think about it