Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your spiritual poem and the dramatic artwork. I was impressed by your describing salvation as a "free gift" and your use of short, rhymed quatrains to intensify the message. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Very well said, excellently put in poetic form. I want my mansion in the sky and would gladly leave this world behind just to be able to touch Him eternally

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

Excellent poem! There is nothing better than living eternally. Would I wish to have that. But, we can't have it. Oh, well. I like your poem anyway. Great job!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

reply by Raul1 on 18-Aug-2018

You're welcome

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Wise words and good rhyming in this faithful and uplifting poem Patricia, I liked your artwork which is appropriate, we have been given a gift and we should appreciated it, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

The greatest gift god could of ever gave man his only son to take our sins and allow us a chance at all his glory. great job and thanks for the share.have a wonderful day

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 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.