Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

Amen sister. I am so thankful for those like you who set the example. You let your light shine so openly and freely. What a blessing that is. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is very nicely composed, Patricia. Presentation is lovely and I like the colors, too. The last stanza is my favorite. Writing flows well. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love the artwork you choose to go with you poem
Which is a perfect match
Your words touch my heart and soul because my mama was always there she was mt mento angle and my queen she help me to understand thing in my life
I'm 78 years young yester I was feeling low I cried out loud I want my mama... the home health aid aske Am I alrigjht
I smile and say yes.
Thahnak you for sharong


I love the artwork you choose to go with your wrie
It is a perfect write
As away your word captures my attention and helps me to stay on the right path
Thank you for sharing theses spiritual words
cookie

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

reply by misscookie on 18-Aug-2018

Not to worry about the small stuff taking care of your eyes are more inportant
just like my feet i can't sit to long my legs get heavy and feet swell up so I might never truly catch up
Take care
Cookie

reply by misscookie on 24-Aug-2018

Not to worry I have been going through my own storm and I know there is more to come
Yet I know He is with me all the way
I can't keep up either
Remember Jesus loves you and so go I
Cookie

Comment from Ginnygray

Excellent

A great message about the only way to redemption and the gift of salvation paid for with Jesus' sacrifice on the cross. We just have to believe in Jesus and receive the gift, not earned by works but by His saving grace!

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

reply by Ginnygray on 18-Aug-2018

I understand. Take care of yourself. I also am having some slow growing cataracts. Trying to delay any action until they are more advanced. Have a blessed day!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Love how you share the gospel, Patricia!! May we all be welcomed into God's kingdom because of Christ's work for us !
Bless you. Hope you are doing well!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

reply by lyenochka on 18-Aug-2018

Sorry to hear, Patricia! Me, too! I have chronic eyelid problems and am trying different meds/solutions.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Yes I accepted that gift. How amazing is that...

for you and me.

Now salvation is a free gift
for you, for me
if we will accept that gift
we'll live eternally.
Well penned
God bless

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

As always, this is beautifully written and conveys a powerful and important message to all of us. This is both inspiring and uplifting. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

Comment from kaymart

Exceptional

LOVELY!!
TRUTH IS SO SIMPLE!
This is so honest and open. I truly hope and pray it will touch the lives of others. It's well written, well said... what more can I say? :-)
I do love how you give the Lord the respect He's due by capitalizing any reference to Him.
KEEP THEM COMING!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very lovely and true poem you have penned Patricia about salvation the true gift Jesus gives. You used very good descriptive words and lovely art work. love, Teri

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

What a wonderful inspirational poem. Very well-written, great choice of words paints a vivid picture gets your message across nicely, great job as always.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review. I am sorry I am so tardy in my reply. My eyes are still giving me fits.