I Walk in Spirit
Faith is Free37 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO ART ASYLUM: I can relate to your posting here from A to Z. Mainly, because it's spiritual. This posting is extremely thoughtful and highlighted. You really worked at putting this work together, Art Asylum. And you've done an excellent job. I like your work here. I tried at writing an acrostic piece of work using our alphabet too. Mine is for the education of our younger children. If you should find the time to do so, you'll find my alphabetical acrostic work in my portfolio on page, 2, at the 16th entry. Doing an acrostic using our alphabet is a fulfilling challenge, isn't it, Art Asylum? I had fun doing it. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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HELLO ART ASYLUM: I can relate to your posting here from A to Z. Mainly, because it's spiritual. This posting is extremely thoughtful and highlighted. You really worked at putting this work together, Art Asylum. And you've done an excellent job. I like your work here. I tried at writing an acrostic piece of work using our alphabet too. Mine is for the education of our younger children. If you should find the time to do so, you'll find my alphabetical acrostic work in my portfolio on page, 2, at the 16th entry. Doing an acrostic using our alphabet is a fulfilling challenge, isn't it, Art Asylum? I had fun doing it. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
Comment from meeshu
this is Great! it makes for a nice companion piece for your Acrostic poem. beautiful language and adherence to rules. nice job, Diana...............meeshu
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this is Great! it makes for a nice companion piece for your Acrostic poem. beautiful language and adherence to rules. nice job, Diana...............meeshu
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a tribute to the wonder of God for his infinite love, forgiveness and mercy - more than a prayer, a reminder to the reader of His perfection and our salvation - a beautiful presentation in its entirety, in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
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In my opinion, a tribute to the wonder of God for his infinite love, forgiveness and mercy - more than a prayer, a reminder to the reader of His perfection and our salvation - a beautiful presentation in its entirety, in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Diana,
This is a great Abecedarian poem for the contest. I love the flow of your words - I didn't feel like anything had been forced to meet the requirements of the poetic form. Good luck to you in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Hi, Diana,
This is a great Abecedarian poem for the contest. I love the flow of your words - I didn't feel like anything had been forced to meet the requirements of the poetic form. Good luck to you in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Hey Patty... Thanks for reading and reviewing... This was a fun one to try... Always fun to stretch. Yours, diana
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful write and Abecedarian which is very hard to achieve because there are some awkward letters to contend with, but you successfully wrote one and your sentiments here are warm and uplifting, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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A faithful write and Abecedarian which is very hard to achieve because there are some awkward letters to contend with, but you successfully wrote one and your sentiments here are warm and uplifting, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Hi Dolly thanks so much for your thoughtful review. Yours, Diana
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"I Walk in Spirit", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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"I Walk in Spirit", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Hey Duchess... thanks so much for your wonderful review. Yours, diana
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Beautiful poem for the world to read. I like how yeshua
gives us zeal and jubilation. We are filled with grace
and can escape from the world's ways. Every letter is beautiful.
All of the stars go back to Jesus. God bless. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Beautiful poem for the world to read. I like how yeshua
gives us zeal and jubilation. We are filled with grace
and can escape from the world's ways. Every letter is beautiful.
All of the stars go back to Jesus. God bless. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Hello Flylikeaneagle... Thanks so much for your stellar/-plus-one review We are truly filled with grace. This was an especially Thanks for your plus one for Jesus... Yours, diana
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Excellent abecedarian. And wow, to fit in xenagogue. You should get an extra star for that alone. This is quite lovely, a beautiful picture to top it off, but your words are wonderful, soulful, touching, befitting spiritual celebration. Great job and good luck!
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Excellent abecedarian. And wow, to fit in xenagogue. You should get an extra star for that alone. This is quite lovely, a beautiful picture to top it off, but your words are wonderful, soulful, touching, befitting spiritual celebration. Great job and good luck!
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Hi Wendy... Thanks I know... xenagogue was a tough one to find. thank again for your thoughtful, stellar/plus-one review... I'm truly honored. Yours, diana
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, to me it seems that you rely heavily on your faith and that;s good. I liked your poem and your thoughts. I hope you'll do well in the contest. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Hi there, to me it seems that you rely heavily on your faith and that;s good. I liked your poem and your thoughts. I hope you'll do well in the contest. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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Hi Ulla... thanks so much for your very thoughtful review. yours, diana
Comment from bard owl
You have done an amazing job with this Abecedarian contest entry. It is so good that it didn't occur to me that is what I was reading! Not the easiest poem style to write, and your words flow down the page without seeming strained or forced. Excellent, uplifting subject. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings to you, Linda
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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You have done an amazing job with this Abecedarian contest entry. It is so good that it didn't occur to me that is what I was reading! Not the easiest poem style to write, and your words flow down the page without seeming strained or forced. Excellent, uplifting subject. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings to you, Linda
Comment Written 05-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2018
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I'm excited that you actually didn't know this was a strict form... that is what I was aiming for and lo and behold you got to to the x, y, z portion and it worked out. Yours, diana
