Fidelity
Acrostic6 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Well I think this is an exceptional Acrostic and explains the meaning of fidelity and the consequences while pointing out that if you cross that line you and you alone are responsible, very well written and best wishes for your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
Well I think this is an exceptional Acrostic and explains the meaning of fidelity and the consequences while pointing out that if you cross that line you and you alone are responsible, very well written and best wishes for your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your complimentary review, and for that green star, I am honored
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Adri7enne
Yes, fidelity is right up there on the list of requirements for a lasting love. I remember making that commitment to my husband and to myself, and there were times during the course of our lives together when I reminded myself that fidelity meant forsaking all others and not going there, not even in my imagination. Which is not to say that temptation ends with commitment. But it means to stand by your promise, even when it's hard. You say it well: "Emotional temptation is a test of trust." And your first letters spell "Fidelity". Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
Yes, fidelity is right up there on the list of requirements for a lasting love. I remember making that commitment to my husband and to myself, and there were times during the course of our lives together when I reminded myself that fidelity meant forsaking all others and not going there, not even in my imagination. Which is not to say that temptation ends with commitment. But it means to stand by your promise, even when it's hard. You say it well: "Emotional temptation is a test of trust." And your first letters spell "Fidelity". Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you very much. I think, like many standards, fidelity?s has gone down. There is so much blatant temptation in the availability of stimulation. Morals are at risk, sex always ?out there?.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from donette1914
written very well on fidelity and the outcome
very heartfelt and well penned
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
very good artwork
I hope the best in the contest
donette1914 Aug 13, 2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
written very well on fidelity and the outcome
very heartfelt and well penned
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
very good artwork
I hope the best in the contest
donette1914 Aug 13, 2018
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thanks so much donette for your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
That first line says it all. Spot on.
So true, too, that each person is responsible for their choice in this instance.
Good presentation and good enjambment in this acrostic poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
That first line says it all. Spot on.
So true, too, that each person is responsible for their choice in this instance.
Good presentation and good enjambment in this acrostic poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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I appreciate your very positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from kiwijenny
YOU ALONE ARE RESPONSIBLE FOR YOUR CHOICES
But each person is tempted when he is lured and enticed by his own desire. - James 1:14
That's pure Bible...I hadn't thought of EMOTIONAL TEMPTATION IS A TEST OF TRUST before
Great work...needs putting on a billboard somewhere
God bless
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
YOU ALONE ARE RESPONSIBLE FOR YOUR CHOICES
But each person is tempted when he is lured and enticed by his own desire. - James 1:14
That's pure Bible...I hadn't thought of EMOTIONAL TEMPTATION IS A TEST OF TRUST before
Great work...needs putting on a billboard somewhere
God bless
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thanks kiwijenny! I loved your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with all your words in this well written acrostic, being faithful is fundamental in a relationship where all could be lost if one strays out of the marriage, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
I so agree with all your words in this well written acrostic, being faithful is fundamental in a relationship where all could be lost if one strays out of the marriage, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thanks Dolly, I appreciate your review support
Hugs, Trisha