Lovers' Trilogy
A Sonnet Triplet28 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Lover's Trilogy", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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"Lover's Trilogy", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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Thank you Dear for such a lovely review! I do appreciate you taking the time to read and review. Have a wonderful day! :-)
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susanjohn,
You deserved the wonderful review.
Take care and God bless you, the Duchess :)))))
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
You take me back hundreds of years with this beautifully crafted poem which calls to mind the work of Emily Dickinson--for me at least. Such an honor to read this. Thank you.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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You take me back hundreds of years with this beautifully crafted poem which calls to mind the work of Emily Dickinson--for me at least. Such an honor to read this. Thank you.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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Shauna! You are so sweet! Thank you for such a wonderful review! I do appreciate you taking the time to read. :-)
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written suite of suite of sonnets Susan. Very much written in the style of the older poets, immaculate in address, great in an understated style, its presentation is wonderfully thoughtful to highlight the poetry not its background art, hence the tasteful artwork, written in iambic pentameter with the ababcdcdefefgg rhyming, well done, blessjngs Roy
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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A beautifully written suite of suite of sonnets Susan. Very much written in the style of the older poets, immaculate in address, great in an understated style, its presentation is wonderfully thoughtful to highlight the poetry not its background art, hence the tasteful artwork, written in iambic pentameter with the ababcdcdefefgg rhyming, well done, blessjngs Roy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Oh Roy! What a truly lovely review!!! I am quite honored!....aww I'm just smiling here, so happy you think so highly of this piece. :-) Thank you so very much!
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My pleasure dear girl.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, the beauty of the poem is significantly evidenced in its fluid adherence to the prompt. It is smooth in movement and narration, its tale expressively wound around random thoughts of love and references, as in a soliloquy. It easily complies with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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In my opinion, the beauty of the poem is significantly evidenced in its fluid adherence to the prompt. It is smooth in movement and narration, its tale expressively wound around random thoughts of love and references, as in a soliloquy. It easily complies with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Aw thank you dear for such an eloquent review! I do appreciate you taking the time to read and review!!! :-)
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Aw, you are very welcome, Susan...Eve
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written sonnet triplet. The format seemsin order and the topic is about love and the wonderful things we do together with our lovers each moment is a wonderful treasure we keep as memories in our mind.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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A very well-written sonnet triplet. The format seemsin order and the topic is about love and the wonderful things we do together with our lovers each moment is a wonderful treasure we keep as memories in our mind.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Hi Sandra, thank you again for an exceptional review. You always have my back! :-)
Comment from Air Spirit
A beautiful, lyrical and graceful poem -- full of graceful verbiage that flows across the page as if waltzing in wonderment... tender, touching, and emotionally infused ... this is an artfully crafted poem "...Oh, kismet's biddings echo in reply
to every lesson gracefully endured,
applaud brave fledging's willingness to fly ...
wings broadened, finding peace in love procured..."
It is inspiring, hopeful, infused with a dash of realism (that sometimes love does diminish and flee), but always returning back to the love of hope and the hope for love...
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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A beautiful, lyrical and graceful poem -- full of graceful verbiage that flows across the page as if waltzing in wonderment... tender, touching, and emotionally infused ... this is an artfully crafted poem "...Oh, kismet's biddings echo in reply
to every lesson gracefully endured,
applaud brave fledging's willingness to fly ...
wings broadened, finding peace in love procured..."
It is inspiring, hopeful, infused with a dash of realism (that sometimes love does diminish and flee), but always returning back to the love of hope and the hope for love...
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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This is an equally well crafted review! Thank you for taking the time to read and offering such lovely thoughts.I'm smiling. :-)))
Comment from Shanbreen
I like this sonnet trilogy. The abab rhyme is not forced, and the rhythm is good except for the punctuations where in some parts it flows but loses meaning. For example,
As teardrops stall, in harsh winds strewn,
beneath dense, billowed fear hope soon evades.
In my mind, a comma or better yet, a semi-colon after fear would do the trick.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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I like this sonnet trilogy. The abab rhyme is not forced, and the rhythm is good except for the punctuations where in some parts it flows but loses meaning. For example,
As teardrops stall, in harsh winds strewn,
beneath dense, billowed fear hope soon evades.
In my mind, a comma or better yet, a semi-colon after fear would do the trick.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!! I do appreciate it. I will certainly consider your suggestion...and thank you for offering it. Have a wonderful day!!! :-)))))
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Wow. This is intense and I feel very much NOT qualified to review. It is simply lovely. I would need to read and re-read and re-read to grasp it, but the flow and the clarity and well . . . the loveliness is so very much ALL there. Creativity at it's peak and I cannot tell you how marvelous this is. AND I am out of sixes! Great job and good luck!
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Wow. This is intense and I feel very much NOT qualified to review. It is simply lovely. I would need to read and re-read and re-read to grasp it, but the flow and the clarity and well . . . the loveliness is so very much ALL there. Creativity at it's peak and I cannot tell you how marvelous this is. AND I am out of sixes! Great job and good luck!
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Dear Wendy, You most certainly are qualified!..as I read your lovely review and wonderfully expressed sentiments. I am quite pleased you enjoyed this sonnet of mine.Thank you so very much. :-) susan
Comment from Mastery
Wow! Susan this is some of the best poetry in sonnet form I have ever witnessed on Fanstory. Congratulations and I feel quite sure that you have the winner right here. Good Luck, :) Bob
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Wow! Susan this is some of the best poetry in sonnet form I have ever witnessed on Fanstory. Congratulations and I feel quite sure that you have the winner right here. Good Luck, :) Bob
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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BOB!...thank you for such kind and encouraging words! I haven't been able to get on FS as much lately...So I apologize for the lack of reviews.I always enjoy your writes. How are you Bob? Life treating you good? I sure hope so. :-) I promise to make my way over to your page soon...have a wonderful day.
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Thank you for your concerns, Susan. Yes, my new book called "Falling Up The Stairs" was picked up by my agent last spring and will be released on September 20 of this year. My health has come a long ways and i am feeling great. bless you and i do hope you get tom read my last post which is still good for 1.17 by the way. (grin) Bob
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PM...
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PM?
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I sent you a private message... :-)
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Okay. LOL
Comment from mally mack
Although I am not a fan of Sonnet style poetry, I enjoyed yours quite a bit. Your words were nothing short of eloquent and they fit well together perfectly. The font carries these words gracefully so the presentation for this poem overall seems as though it would be very visually appealing for your readers.
Best Wishes
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Although I am not a fan of Sonnet style poetry, I enjoyed yours quite a bit. Your words were nothing short of eloquent and they fit well together perfectly. The font carries these words gracefully so the presentation for this poem overall seems as though it would be very visually appealing for your readers.
Best Wishes
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you Mallory for taking the time to read and review! I do appreciate it! :-)
