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Comment from DeboraDyess
Amen amen and amen. It's as relavent today as it was two years ago. I'd hope that we've learned and grown as a culture, but I'm afraid we're stagnant as a people. It's frustrating.
The piece was well-written. Cnogratz (two years late) on the certificate. :)
Be blessed,
Deb
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Amen amen and amen. It's as relavent today as it was two years ago. I'd hope that we've learned and grown as a culture, but I'm afraid we're stagnant as a people. It's frustrating.
The piece was well-written. Cnogratz (two years late) on the certificate. :)
Be blessed,
Deb
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We, as a nation, are in a horrible mess and it just gets worse and worse. We need to turn back to God and start living the live he has modeled with His son Jesus. Thank you for re-posting this.
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We, as a nation, are in a horrible mess and it just gets worse and worse. We need to turn back to God and start living the live he has modeled with His son Jesus. Thank you for re-posting this.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
Comment from Raven Ink
Thank you for writing something like this. In the spirit of coming together, especially now, this is brilliant. Achievement rightfully earned. Keep it up.
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Thank you for writing something like this. In the spirit of coming together, especially now, this is brilliant. Achievement rightfully earned. Keep it up.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an excellent and patriotic piece of writing! All school age children should be required to put this to memory and rehashed every year till it is ingrained in their thinking!
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This is an excellent and patriotic piece of writing! All school age children should be required to put this to memory and rehashed every year till it is ingrained in their thinking!
Comment Written 31-May-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
You get right to the point, a no-nonsense prescription for humans to stop screwing things up. I see you had requisite words for this contest--good luck! Cheers. LIZ
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You get right to the point, a no-nonsense prescription for humans to stop screwing things up. I see you had requisite words for this contest--good luck! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 31-May-2020
Comment from CHANYA MASHENGU
I love your work more and more. You have inspired me.
We're losing human values patience and quality perseverance; we must avoid immoral, inhuman actions, control crimes, stop committing criminal activities, change our attitudes; we should believe, love man, trust and have faith in God, save humanity, secure and promote civilization.
Make A Better World writing prompt entry
God, values, humanity and civilization on the concept that man has been losing human values, what man should do to make and keep this world a better place of living.
I add by starting with self. I would start with myself.
Bravo bro
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I love your work more and more. You have inspired me.
We're losing human values patience and quality perseverance; we must avoid immoral, inhuman actions, control crimes, stop committing criminal activities, change our attitudes; we should believe, love man, trust and have faith in God, save humanity, secure and promote civilization.
Make A Better World writing prompt entry
God, values, humanity and civilization on the concept that man has been losing human values, what man should do to make and keep this world a better place of living.
I add by starting with self. I would start with myself.
Bravo bro
Comment Written 31-May-2020
Comment from Megan3333
I really like this it is saying what most people are thinking. The violence needs to stop and we need to have peace. I also like the picture it's really nice.
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I really like this it is saying what most people are thinking. The violence needs to stop and we need to have peace. I also like the picture it's really nice.
Comment Written 31-May-2020
Comment from MzDimplez13
You did a very good job honestly I got the message straight forward to my outlook on what you spoke i think it is very compelling and you sure did exactly what was asked as far as the guidelines to this subject matter so good poem '+'
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You did a very good job honestly I got the message straight forward to my outlook on what you spoke i think it is very compelling and you sure did exactly what was asked as far as the guidelines to this subject matter so good poem '+'
Comment Written 31-May-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This forty-word flash fiction story, In God We Trust, has the required words, word count, and manages to place everything into one sentence. The theme is clear and the message profound.
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This forty-word flash fiction story, In God We Trust, has the required words, word count, and manages to place everything into one sentence. The theme is clear and the message profound.
Comment Written 31-May-2020
Comment from Insider98
Simple, raw but interesting. You tell some hard truths. People are abandoning values like love and trust. Great job, I hope it does well in the contest.
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Simple, raw but interesting. You tell some hard truths. People are abandoning values like love and trust. Great job, I hope it does well in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
