Redhead In My Head
a haiku about a beautiful redhead woman33 total reviews
Comment from friartuck
Such a lovely pale green, is prehnite! Goes well with those copper tresses, and exceptionally well in this haiku! Thank you for posting it, and good luck in the contest!
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Such a lovely pale green, is prehnite! Goes well with those copper tresses, and exceptionally well in this haiku! Thank you for posting it, and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from donette1914
very cleaver!!!!
I hope for the best in the contest
I love the artwork
It was an a honor to read your well penned work
and thank you for sharing
donette1914 Aug,1 2018
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very cleaver!!!!
I hope for the best in the contest
I love the artwork
It was an a honor to read your well penned work
and thank you for sharing
donette1914 Aug,1 2018
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from F. Wehr3
This is a beautiful poem, but it is not a haiku. A haiku deals with nature, contains a satori, and a kigo. None of these elements have been displayed. A lovely 575, so the stars are for that reason.
Take care,
Russell
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This is a beautiful poem, but it is not a haiku. A haiku deals with nature, contains a satori, and a kigo. None of these elements have been displayed. A lovely 575, so the stars are for that reason.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from Writeling
A lovely haiku, with colour painted in the words. I had to look up 'prehnite, and found it's the perfect adjective to describe her eyes.
with best wishes, Writeling
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A lovely haiku, with colour painted in the words. I had to look up 'prehnite, and found it's the perfect adjective to describe her eyes.
with best wishes, Writeling
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from Robbie Yates
Very nice haiku. I love how you've likened the beautiful red hair to molten copper - hot and glossy. I'll admit, though, I had to google "Prehnite!" Well done.
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Very nice haiku. I love how you've likened the beautiful red hair to molten copper - hot and glossy. I'll admit, though, I had to google "Prehnite!" Well done.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Flaming red hair is a stunning sight when natural and rich in colour, not everyone likes redheads, but I do and i like your fine write too, love Dolly x
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Flaming red hair is a stunning sight when natural and rich in colour, not everyone likes redheads, but I do and i like your fine write too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from Urial
Hi Miranda,
Very bright three line poem. It is seeing that you used the poet's artist 'eye' to write this. I applaud that!
Peace be with you Miranda,
Urial
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Hi Miranda,
Very bright three line poem. It is seeing that you used the poet's artist 'eye' to write this. I applaud that!
Peace be with you Miranda,
Urial
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Stunningly visual poem, the art work must have been made for it. Nothing can be added to this very descriptive Haiku. Best wishes.
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Stunningly visual poem, the art work must have been made for it. Nothing can be added to this very descriptive Haiku. Best wishes.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Redhead in My Head", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Each word of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Redhead in My Head", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Each word of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I knew a girl with long red hair. She was the world's biggest hypochondriac. Whenever she read about something on the internet, she was convinced she had it. Her doctor told her to throw way her computer. It was the source of all her illness.
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I knew a girl with long red hair. She was the world's biggest hypochondriac. Whenever she read about something on the internet, she was convinced she had it. Her doctor told her to throw way her computer. It was the source of all her illness.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
