Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What a unique and lovely worded piece, Ricky! :) :) The technique you have employed here of using those same "main" words at the beginning of each stanza yet re-arranging them is so very effective - your Nina must be so very loved to inspire such a beautiful piece! :) :) Lucky you and lucky her ... be sure to keep the music playing!!

Thank you for sharing that piece of your heart today!

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2018

Thanks for reviewing and have a Blessed Day.
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Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

This is a great poem Dr Ricky. By the sounds of it Nina seems to have made a most positive impression with you. :)

One wee typo

Marrie (Marry) me and make me happy again

All the best to you. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018

She's my waitress.
A Sweet Mexican Widow.
Thanks Gloria.
Ricky...

Comment from Michael Steinert

Excellent

This is such a lovely poem and it does a great job of describing a passionate relationship I really liked the heavenly connection line. Great read and picture

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2018

Thanks Mike glad you enjoyed this.
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