Indoctrination: An A-Z Manual
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Comment from heart of Lou
This is great! It's lively and has a great beat, exactly like patriotic soldiers marching off to victory. The color is gorgeous. Good luck with the contest!
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This is great! It's lively and has a great beat, exactly like patriotic soldiers marching off to victory. The color is gorgeous. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
Comment from L E Scott
Beautiful insight into the way despots gain power. Your poem rings true on so many levels. How much of history must be repeated before we learn from it?
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Beautiful insight into the way despots gain power. Your poem rings true on so many levels. How much of history must be repeated before we learn from it?
Comment Written 03-Aug-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
A very powerful and well-written abecedarian poem. Your topic is compelling! This style of poetry is not easy to write from A-Z, but you have met the challenge. Good luck in the contest.
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A very powerful and well-written abecedarian poem. Your topic is compelling! This style of poetry is not easy to write from A-Z, but you have met the challenge. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from kiwijenny
With an abecedarian poem I always look at what a poet does with X
Well done to do an X For put your mark,,,write boldly your X_____
I love the red which reads a very different poem, clever
God bless
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With an abecedarian poem I always look at what a poet does with X
Well done to do an X For put your mark,,,write boldly your X_____
I love the red which reads a very different poem, clever
God bless
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from Henry King
This is an excellent Abecedarian poem for the contest. It uses the letters in a very good philosophical and religious piece if free verse poetry. Well done.
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This is an excellent Abecedarian poem for the contest. It uses the letters in a very good philosophical and religious piece if free verse poetry. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from royowen
It's jolly hard to write one of these abecdarian posts X is almost always a stumbling block, but otherwise up you've donevacstiroling job on this mighty effort. Great presentation, love the varied colours and inventive dialogue, well done,good luck, blessjngs, Roy
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It's jolly hard to write one of these abecdarian posts X is almost always a stumbling block, but otherwise up you've donevacstiroling job on this mighty effort. Great presentation, love the varied colours and inventive dialogue, well done,good luck, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from Lady Jane
I am in awe of the presentation, the style and formatting, and the carefully chosen words employed to present this amazing poem. This style is hard to nail down with good flow and message, but you've done it perfectly, I truly enjoyed reading this indoctrinating piece. You've required the reader to ponder this world in all its forms and with all its vices. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest with this excellent write.
Janelle
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I am in awe of the presentation, the style and formatting, and the carefully chosen words employed to present this amazing poem. This style is hard to nail down with good flow and message, but you've done it perfectly, I truly enjoyed reading this indoctrinating piece. You've required the reader to ponder this world in all its forms and with all its vices. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest with this excellent write.
Janelle
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I can't believe you pulled this off. You're a genius. Your eyeball gave me an epileptic fit. I rolled around the floor and tweeked like Joe Cocker. I wish I had a video. I would have gone viral on YouTube.
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I can't believe you pulled this off. You're a genius. Your eyeball gave me an epileptic fit. I rolled around the floor and tweeked like Joe Cocker. I wish I had a video. I would have gone viral on YouTube.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
I wish I had another six because this deserves one! You rival the lyrics in Hamilton. Your flow, layout and choice of colors and picture are just so perfect!
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I wish I had another six because this deserves one! You rival the lyrics in Hamilton. Your flow, layout and choice of colors and picture are just so perfect!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
