Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello ... this is great, I love your peeves. But this is a peeve of mine too, we are so conscious of 'correctness' that we are becoming paranoid and confused. I get sick of the 'do's and 'don'ts' too. So much is money driven. They want us to consume more and more, and no politician gets elected on a platform of less and less, but that is what has to happen for us to be sustainable. But we are marketed to in one way or another from morning till night.

This was well written in poetic form. I thought it was great and noticed no errors and have no suggestions for improvement, Thanks for sharing a poem that is full of a lot of common sense, that most uncommon of virtues, LOL. Cheers, Ana.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

Thanks very much for the most delightful review, Ana. Glad we are on the same page on this. Most appreciated - Craig

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about little sins we do that is not good for our overall health. I was a smoker for many years, after ten years without smoking, I still suffer some effects of my bad habit.

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 Comment Written 27-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

Thanks very much, Sandra. Me too. Most grateful, Craig

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

These are my sentiments entirely. Great poem as usual , Craig, I really enjoyed reading it. I'm glad you explained the word misocapnist as I hadn't a clue what it meant. Good word.
Take care jen

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 Comment Written 27-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

Many thanks, Jen. I never would have figured out the meaning without being told. Cheers, Craig