Dear is this Gift
3-5-3 contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Congratulations in placing in the contest with this good entry. Living each day the best we can is the key to enjoying life. Your piece is well worded and illustrated. Marilyn
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
Congratulations in placing in the contest with this good entry. Living each day the best we can is the key to enjoying life. Your piece is well worded and illustrated. Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Yes, it is the essential key. Thank you for the fantastic review, Marilyn. I found this great picture on Fanart and just had to use it. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
;)
Ron
Comment from bard owl
I have heard it said that every day we live is a blessing and your 5-7-5 says that beautifully. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings to you, Linda
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
I have heard it said that every day we live is a blessing and your 5-7-5 says that beautifully. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings to you, Linda
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for the kind review, Linda. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Bill Schott
This three-five-three poem, Dear Is the Gift, uses the proper syllable formatting and acknowledges the gift that keeps on giving every twenty-four hours.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
This three-five-three poem, Dear Is the Gift, uses the proper syllable formatting and acknowledges the gift that keeps on giving every twenty-four hours.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Thank you, Bill. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good image for your poem.
-Syllable count is good.
-This little girl definitely
has her own ideas!
-They don't make the
matter at hand any
easier, it seems.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
-A good image for your poem.
-Syllable count is good.
-This little girl definitely
has her own ideas!
-They don't make the
matter at hand any
easier, it seems.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Pam. I'm glad you liked this silly thing.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a fun piece (and what an adorable little angel you have there!), and it certainly fits the prescription if you use one of the pronunciations for idea -- great job!
Thanks for sharing that smile with us and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
Such a fun piece (and what an adorable little angel you have there!), and it certainly fits the prescription if you use one of the pronunciations for idea -- great job!
Thanks for sharing that smile with us and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Y.M.R. The pic is just one I found in a Google Image search and I just had to use it, lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.