Puncturing Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "I'm Just A Dead Man Walking!"My thoughts on this "Ago Old Subject."
2 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a very fast paced writing that keeps whirling us along as you describe accidents, comas and losing a loved one. The suspense and tension fill the reader as we go along. Good write.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
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This is a very fast paced writing that keeps whirling us along as you describe accidents, comas and losing a loved one. The suspense and tension fill the reader as we go along. Good write.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
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Thanks Sugarray777.
I will complete this later today.
Dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
This poem (for me) creates the portrait of a man in denial and it is wonderfully executed. Your writing shows a need to dig deeper and deeper into mess and pain which is refreshing in an industry where authors want to pretty things up. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
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This poem (for me) creates the portrait of a man in denial and it is wonderfully executed. Your writing shows a need to dig deeper and deeper into mess and pain which is refreshing in an industry where authors want to pretty things up. Well done!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018
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Thanks Shauna for your wonderful Time and Review.
Ricky...
