Puncturing Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "The Killing Fields Revisited"My thoughts on this "Ago Old Subject."
3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh Ricky, as a mom of sons, my heart is breaking for you....your words are haunting and simply make me want to reach through the computer and hug you really tightly......as an author, I am thoroughly impressed... your presentation of the events of that night is nothing short of brilliant using the poles and the Bobby Russell/Vicki Lawrence song.....the emotional upheaval is so very real that any reader cannot help but feel the loss. In short, just wow.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
Oh Ricky, as a mom of sons, my heart is breaking for you....your words are haunting and simply make me want to reach through the computer and hug you really tightly......as an author, I am thoroughly impressed... your presentation of the events of that night is nothing short of brilliant using the poles and the Bobby Russell/Vicki Lawrence song.....the emotional upheaval is so very real that any reader cannot help but feel the loss. In short, just wow.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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This is now completed and thank you for the lovely starsYevette!
Ricky...
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This is the first time I have read anything like this and my heart cried. it hurts to lose and it is not fair, but it is over and you did what you had to do.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
This is the first time I have read anything like this and my heart cried. it hurts to lose and it is not fair, but it is over and you did what you had to do.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thanks Barb.
I will continue this a little later.
Ricky...
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
"April First, 2003, Jason Richard Smrkovsky."
{Our Only Son}
"Would be Literally 'Sliced, Diced, Dissected, and Distributed' to Four, Extremely, Grateful, Human Beings."
"Yes, Four, Lucky, Souls...
"And Yes, it's Funny how 'The Human Mind' reacts to Pain, Suffering, and Tragedy."
End of Part Number Two.
Part Number Three.
"Pain, Suffering, and Tragedy" Amazing, heartrending and moving as always RIcky well done love and God bless you Meia xx
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
"April First, 2003, Jason Richard Smrkovsky."
{Our Only Son}
"Would be Literally 'Sliced, Diced, Dissected, and Distributed' to Four, Extremely, Grateful, Human Beings."
"Yes, Four, Lucky, Souls...
"And Yes, it's Funny how 'The Human Mind' reacts to Pain, Suffering, and Tragedy."
End of Part Number Two.
Part Number Three.
"Pain, Suffering, and Tragedy" Amazing, heartrending and moving as always RIcky well done love and God bless you Meia xx
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thanks Meia.
I will continue this a little later.
Ricky...