The sight of you
A three line poem, 5-7-745 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Loving and romantic words of devotion and love. Your sentiments here are clear and I wish you luck with the contest, a passionate moment depicted in three lines, the connection is made, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Loving and romantic words of devotion and love. Your sentiments here are clear and I wish you luck with the contest, a passionate moment depicted in three lines, the connection is made, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kapot
Comment from Urial
Hi Kahpot,
Excellent poem of how women can have the magic to mesmerize us. The unquenched and desire words are great uses. And the soul alone can be seen in the eyes.
Peace be with you,
Urial
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Hi Kahpot,
Excellent poem of how women can have the magic to mesmerize us. The unquenched and desire words are great uses. And the soul alone can be seen in the eyes.
Peace be with you,
Urial
Comment Written 28-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Debbie Pope
My eyes are taking in that photo. It is mesmerizingly beautiful.
Your poem is exquisite as well--so full of innuendo. It is simple but passionate. "Quenching" is one of my favorite words. So much better than satisfying. Good word selection.
Excellent entry.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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My eyes are taking in that photo. It is mesmerizingly beautiful.
Your poem is exquisite as well--so full of innuendo. It is simple but passionate. "Quenching" is one of my favorite words. So much better than satisfying. Good word selection.
Excellent entry.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your very encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
It's a very raw piece and only so short almost nude if you will, it says so much of human existence and how we assess others physical and emotionally, human nature
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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It's a very raw piece and only so short almost nude if you will, it says so much of human existence and how we assess others physical and emotionally, human nature
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your understanding review****kahpot
Comment from Poemster98
I really like this. It's short, but it says so much. I really like the picture too. It expounds the poem somewhat. It reminds me of a poem I wrote a long time ago called-I found myself in his eyes. Great job!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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I really like this. It's short, but it says so much. I really like the picture too. It expounds the poem somewhat. It reminds me of a poem I wrote a long time ago called-I found myself in his eyes. Great job!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Joan E.
What an eye-catching artwork you selected--no pun intended! Your title and Three-Line Poem are quite evocative. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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What an eye-catching artwork you selected--no pun intended! Your title and Three-Line Poem are quite evocative. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Friend,
One's eyes are the very first thing I notice about people...And, yes, I agree, that the "tell us the truth in all situations."
Your poetic offering is well-crafted and sensual! A fine presentation!
diane
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Hello Friend,
One's eyes are the very first thing I notice about people...And, yes, I agree, that the "tell us the truth in all situations."
Your poetic offering is well-crafted and sensual! A fine presentation!
diane
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Thank you very mmuch****kahpot
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
this poem is carefully done and makes a big impact in three lines. the picture is a perfect match! together the poem and the picture definitely tell an entire story, love story or otherwise
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this poem is carefully done and makes a big impact in three lines. the picture is a perfect match! together the poem and the picture definitely tell an entire story, love story or otherwise
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful and encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Oatmeal
Kahpot,
You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The flow was very nice. The theme was good. Thoughts are expressed and described well.
The artwork complemented your poem.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Kahpot,
You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The flow was very nice. The theme was good. Thoughts are expressed and described well.
The artwork complemented your poem.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this very encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Angela Hayes
Good read, educational, well presented, creative use of words, creative way of thinking, 3 line poem...very interesting write in three lines, image to match.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Good read, educational, well presented, creative use of words, creative way of thinking, 3 line poem...very interesting write in three lines, image to match.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You're welcome!
