Africa
See Notes: A world beyond my wildest imagination.68 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Wow, I loved this, and could follow you every step of the way. I've been to a few safaris myself out of Nairobi, just as you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It's an amazing experience. A beautiful poem with the story within, and so very well told. Good luck. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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Wow, I loved this, and could follow you every step of the way. I've been to a few safaris myself out of Nairobi, just as you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It's an amazing experience. A beautiful poem with the story within, and so very well told. Good luck. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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Hey Ulla...
I did enjoy my trip to Nairobi it doesn't get better than that I hope I never see the world through jaded eyes. thanks so much yours, diana
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a STUNNING write, well constructed and narrated in almost silken smooth, rhyming rhythm - perfect in retaining the awe and attention of this reader and certainly a difficult poem to beat in any contest - it fully complies with the prompt, and I wish you success with this outstanding write...
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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In my opinion, a STUNNING write, well constructed and narrated in almost silken smooth, rhyming rhythm - perfect in retaining the awe and attention of this reader and certainly a difficult poem to beat in any contest - it fully complies with the prompt, and I wish you success with this outstanding write...
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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Hi evesayshi:
I'm reeling over STUNNING... such an endorsement... I'm grateful for your reaction. I can't thank you enough for your stellar/plus-one review. It means the world... yours, diana
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You are so welcome, Diana - I meant every single word. Thank you for sharing this marvelous write..Eve
Comment from robyn corum
Hello, dear traveler!
I have to admit that right away I was quite jealous. I can only faintly TRY to imagine what wondrous sights you've seen and experienced. Thank you for sharing all of this with us -- at least we can visit vicariously!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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Hello, dear traveler!
I have to admit that right away I was quite jealous. I can only faintly TRY to imagine what wondrous sights you've seen and experienced. Thank you for sharing all of this with us -- at least we can visit vicariously!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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Hi Robyn... The sights were wondrous...and that isn't even really scratching the surface. I'm happy you took the trip with me kiddo. yours, diana
Comment from artisart4u
You would probably have to be there to appreciate it.
Your poem sounds exciting and full of adventure. You have a lot to write and talk about.
Good luck with it.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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You would probably have to be there to appreciate it.
Your poem sounds exciting and full of adventure. You have a lot to write and talk about.
Good luck with it.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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Hey Artisart4u: Well kiddo I was there and I completely appreciate it... I love sharing with others and there adventures through life. It is a gift from others when I get to know them through their poems. Thanks for the stellar/plus-one review. Yours, diana
Comment from misscookie
I like the post you choose to use to go with your poem
It is a very good match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
There was never a dull moment and I thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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I like the post you choose to use to go with your poem
It is a very good match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
There was never a dull moment and I thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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hey misscookie... how are you today... thanks for much for your wonderful review kiddo. yours, diana
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My p[pleasure until next time
Cookie
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
I particularly appreciate your opening. There is a building of tension and anticipation which sets the tone of the country quite strong. The subheadings are a nice touch and show innovation in your storytelling.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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I particularly appreciate your opening. There is a building of tension and anticipation which sets the tone of the country quite strong. The subheadings are a nice touch and show innovation in your storytelling.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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Thanks Shauna... Bloom?
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Great job with this one. I enjoyed your flow and word choices and how you tied it all together great piece. Thanks for sharing with us. It was a very enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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Great job with this one. I enjoyed your flow and word choices and how you tied it all together great piece. Thanks for sharing with us. It was a very enjoyable read.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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Hey Blue Hendrix:
Thanks so much for your stellar review. yours, diana
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Share a Story in a Poem' writing prompt.
Your Safari story is clear and well told in your verse. The picture is amazing as well.
Nicely done and I wish you luck in the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Share a Story in a Poem' writing prompt.
Your Safari story is clear and well told in your verse. The picture is amazing as well.
Nicely done and I wish you luck in the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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Your lips to Gods ears Sharon... I'l keep a good thought. thanks so much for this thoughtful review. yours, diana
Comment from A. Willow Bends
This poem takes the reader on a vicarious journey without ever leaving their computer. What you must have seen! I am only sorry I am out of six star awards. Beautiful picture chosen to match your absolutely wonder description of your trip. What an adventure and how well you paid tribute to it!
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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This poem takes the reader on a vicarious journey without ever leaving their computer. What you must have seen! I am only sorry I am out of six star awards. Beautiful picture chosen to match your absolutely wonder description of your trip. What an adventure and how well you paid tribute to it!
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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Wendy... I take your virtual sixth star and toast you. yours, diana
Comment from jenintorre
Wow. I really enjoyed reading this travelogue/poem. I t was so descriptive that I felt that I was there with you all the way. I loved the last line. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers Jen.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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Wow. I really enjoyed reading this travelogue/poem. I t was so descriptive that I felt that I was there with you all the way. I loved the last line. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers Jen.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2018
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Hey Jenintorre...
Thanks kiddo for your stellar review. yours, diana
