Winter's Artwork
Nature's cold canvas...6 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Yes a nice metaphorical touch to this 5-7-5 Winter Poem reminding us of Winter's icy atmosphere as it waits to 'paint its frosty pictures -' lovely visual
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Yes a nice metaphorical touch to this 5-7-5 Winter Poem reminding us of Winter's icy atmosphere as it waits to 'paint its frosty pictures -' lovely visual
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you..I'll have to admit that I'm not a fan of winter weather..but it can be beautiful.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nice. Image works well with your words and is compelling. Your poem flows well from line to line and all three lines work well with each other. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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This is very nice. Image works well with your words and is compelling. Your poem flows well from line to line and all three lines work well with each other. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you for taking time to read and review, I really appreciate it.
Comment from LynnetteOK
What a wonderful way to express the beauty of winter. I love theBest of luck in the contest picture you chose to use with it as well.
Best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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What a wonderful way to express the beauty of winter. I love theBest of luck in the contest picture you chose to use with it as well.
Best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Thank you this very nice review and for taking time to read my work
Comment from Gloria ....
Really a very nice winter short form, author. Frost pictures are really something when done well an d they usually are.
Couple of typos Winter waits it's (its)
to paint it's (its)
Best of luck to you in the contest with this gem.
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Really a very nice winter short form, author. Frost pictures are really something when done well an d they usually are.
Couple of typos Winter waits it's (its)
to paint it's (its)
Best of luck to you in the contest with this gem.
Gloria
Comment Written 22-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the nice review and the heads up on the typos. I've already corrected them and really appreciate the help.
Comment from Dean Kuch
The intricate patterns that a frigid winter frost etches on our widow panes are so beautiful and individually unique.
Kinda like us, in many ways.
Excellent 5-7-5 entry.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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The intricate patterns that a frigid winter frost etches on our widow panes are so beautiful and individually unique.
Kinda like us, in many ways.
Excellent 5-7-5 entry.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much.. I value your opinion.
Comment from Van
The artwork and title lend credence to the metaphor of winter being artwork. I would only make one recommendation. The font and background color are a bit hard on the eyes... but then again, winter can be too. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018
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The artwork and title lend credence to the metaphor of winter being artwork. I would only make one recommendation. The font and background color are a bit hard on the eyes... but then again, winter can be too. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018
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Thank you for the nice review and the advice..I've already changed it.
