Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good artwork and presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The humidity can be
unbearable in the summer,
and you express that well
with the imagery in your poem.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018

I thank you kindly for your read and supportive comments. I appreciate the picture because it exemplifies the words. It is difficult to paint a picture in the reader's mind with such few words. Your commenrs say that I did it.

Have a great weekend.
Mystery writer

reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Jul-2018

You are very welcome, and I am glad to hear you appreciated my comments.

reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018

:)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about relation between season and humidity, in mid-summer humidity in the air is always high and in July heat is oppressive naturally; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018

Good morning. Thank you for the read and kindness in the comments. This came of the top of my head this morning.

Have a blessed weekend.
Mystery writer