The Decision 5-7-5
If two don't agree, one has to make the decision38 total reviews
Comment from Hitcher
I can see this one playing out in my minds eye and what I see is heartache. heartache for the one who was left originally and has overcame it now and heartache for the the one who left and then realized that grass is not always greener on the other side and has lost out twice...Ouch!
I Know!! : )) I saw a lot from your little 3 lined poem... Good luck!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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I can see this one playing out in my minds eye and what I see is heartache. heartache for the one who was left originally and has overcame it now and heartache for the the one who left and then realized that grass is not always greener on the other side and has lost out twice...Ouch!
I Know!! : )) I saw a lot from your little 3 lined poem... Good luck!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for your insight...🙂
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
That's right. It sounds like they left and where they went it didn't work out, so, they're trying to come back. I agree with the message of this. Keep it moving is what I'd say. I enjoyed reading this. Well done Loannalois!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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That's right. It sounds like they left and where they went it didn't work out, so, they're trying to come back. I agree with the message of this. Keep it moving is what I'd say. I enjoyed reading this. Well done Loannalois!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Thank you so very much,Jeffrey. I loved it when you said,?Keep it moving..?. Boy,Truer words were never spoken.
Comment from damommy
That's telling him. Let him stay with his new life. Sometimes, it's just to late to go back.
This is short and to the point. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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That's telling him. Let him stay with his new life. Sometimes, it's just to late to go back.
This is short and to the point. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Love your name😁I thank you so very much for writing.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is an excellent poem. It's a great entry in the 3 Line Poetry contest. You should do very well. Maybe even win. I never do, but I still like to enter.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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This is an excellent poem. It's a great entry in the 3 Line Poetry contest. You should do very well. Maybe even win. I never do, but I still like to enter.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Awe. When we write we know that it is a part of us on paper... and some will understand;some
Won?t. We just keep on, don?t we?
Thanks and blessings, Lo
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I think this is good advice in nearly all cases. Well written three line poem. Best wishes in the contest, my friend with this good entry~Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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I think this is good advice in nearly all cases. Well written three line poem. Best wishes in the contest, my friend with this good entry~Debbie
Comment Written 21-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Thank you Debbie. I appreciate your kind words. Thanks and Blessings, Lo
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, this poem says it all, succinctly and without reservation - the message is distinct and cannot be misinterpreted - love it - complies fully with the prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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In my opinion, this poem says it all, succinctly and without reservation - the message is distinct and cannot be misinterpreted - love it - complies fully with the prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 21-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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You just made my day. What nice things to say. Blessings, Loh
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You are very welcome indeed,Loanna...Eve
Comment from rjuselius
indeed. many relationships row back and forward. I believe that when the partnership loses its meaning then it is better to just move along.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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indeed. many relationships row back and forward. I believe that when the partnership loses its meaning then it is better to just move along.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 21-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Here?s a hearty hug right back! Thanks for such nice comments. Blessings, Lo
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Nicely written poem very nice flow. I didn't see
any Corrections that need to be made. Nice imagery good word choices and I think you just did an overall very good job.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Nicely written poem very nice flow. I didn't see
any Corrections that need to be made. Nice imagery good word choices and I think you just did an overall very good job.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Thank you so very much, Blue. I appreciate the encouragement.
Blessings, Lo
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Your welcome
Comment from Joan E.
I have not read your work for a while--just over-scheduled--and was glad to catch up. I admired your 5-7-5 interpretation for this contest. I hope that it is not autobiographical, but it certainly rings true. I also very much liked the parallel artwork you selected. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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I have not read your work for a while--just over-scheduled--and was glad to catch up. I admired your 5-7-5 interpretation for this contest. I hope that it is not autobiographical, but it certainly rings true. I also very much liked the parallel artwork you selected. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Thank you again... I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Spitfire
Good use of alliteration with life, let's leave. Assonance with move and new. A six for not using an exclamation point. The tone comes across without this redundancy.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Good use of alliteration with life, let's leave. Assonance with move and new. A six for not using an exclamation point. The tone comes across without this redundancy.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
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Oh Spitfire! You made me laugh out loud!!
I had a teacher way back who wrote on my paper,?I almost dropped you down to a B because of your exclamation points.? Ha, Lo
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Thanks for sharing that. :-)
